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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-21-05, 09:25 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP:
ok this was a good piece. the imagery was definitely there although if you upped your vocab you coulda created a greater level of emotion. flow was ok though. overall this was a decent piece.
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