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Old 10-04-05, 10:16 PM   #1
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beat: Arcane..."Better Days"


Lyrics: All Q


Theme: This is truth...like a purging for me...everything said here is true...the names...true...the accounts...true...My grandmother, Inez Crank, is my heart...she's my angel from God...and this track was written as if it wud be a conversation I wud have with her, confessing and reminiscing about things from my childhood...until the last few bars and its like IM lashing out...cursing...so I wudn't be talking to my grandma that way


It's short...but as real as I've ever been on a track





Holla


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Old 10-04-05, 10:38 PM   #2
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listening:
beat is dope, nice sampling, yeah nice choice, flow is mmm i dunno , the lyrics are really dope, u really love her huh i can see it man , just lil feed but dope track man

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Old 10-04-05, 11:55 PM   #3
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im liking the beat at first. the sample is real cool.

lyrically it was cool. got to learn about you gettin robbed and not fighting anyone. so that was cool i guess.

your mic prescence was there. clear and loud. but not too loud. quality was decent. not too good but not too bad.
your flow was definitely original. something kinda strange cause you would add more words and then it'd be less and then more. so it was original.
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Old 10-05-05, 05:50 AM   #4
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*listening*

beat's nice.... delivery is aight, i would say put more emotion into it. lyrics and word choice is pretty decent. some forced multis... but most of them were coo. the quality isn't up to snuff but it's still legit in my opinion. liked the ending, good shit man keep it up. you got potential

return the favor man.
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Old 10-05-05, 06:43 AM   #5
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lyrics are 100% personal


I chose not to process my vocals too much




preciate da feed
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Old 10-05-05, 06:45 AM   #6
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yea this shit was ill homie nice man nice.....

ayo check out my OM called Drama Settas with One mic, Paul caine and Hitchcock....its dope boi!!!
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Old 10-05-05, 06:54 AM   #7
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im liking the beat at first. the sample is real cool.

lyrically it was cool. got to learn about you gettin robbed and not fighting anyone. so that was cool i guess.

your mic prescence was there. clear and loud. but not too loud. quality was decent. not too good but not too bad.
your flow was definitely original. something kinda strange cause you would add more words and then it'd be less and then more. so it was original.




I wasn't "robbed"...I said he "robbed me" because he "fooled" with me

meanin I was molested



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Old 10-05-05, 07:22 PM   #8
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werd, i liked that shit holmes, werd
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Old 10-06-05, 06:56 AM   #9
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^^^love ur feed nigga

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Old 10-06-05, 03:54 PM   #10
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first things first... booo for not making it longer... secondly, the real shyt is a lot better than the made up bullshyt that goes on in hip-hop so the connection is always there when ya coming from real experiences... 3 decent track but i felt ya coulda put more emotion into it... ya had some but i felt it wasn't sufficient for ya track... quality is decent as usual... a lil tweaking woulda helped but you explained that already so we'll leave it at that... cool track put way too short... if you want kats to listen to ya shyt and feel where ya coming from you should give them an earful and not tease ya audience and have them looking for more by the end...out
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Old 10-06-05, 04:36 PM   #11
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good shit man....

your flow at the beginning is a bit weird...but different...so i like it.....

im feelin the real life experiences....always makes a song more fun to listen to and more meaningful.....lyrics are nice....delivery n presence is there....

not a bad track man...keep it up
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Old 10-06-05, 10:13 PM   #12
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first things first... booo for not making it longer... secondly, the real shyt is a lot better than the made up bullshyt that goes on in hip-hop so the connection is always there when ya coming from real experiences... 3 decent track but i felt ya coulda put more emotion into it... ya had some but i felt it wasn't sufficient for ya track... quality is decent as usual... a lil tweaking woulda helped but you explained that already so we'll leave it at that... cool track put way too short... if you want kats to listen to ya shyt and feel where ya coming from you should give them an earful and not tease ya audience and have them looking for more by the end...out




are u calling me a cock tease?


haaa...I feel where ur coming from
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Old 10-07-05, 12:36 AM   #13
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word Q...please RTF on Obvious Subliminals...........thanks
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Old 10-07-05, 02:51 PM   #14
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iiite listening now.....likin the beat..nice good feel to it, I see that ure tryin to have a lil variety in youre lyrics and ure flow and I like that, the lyrics are nice, maybe have more emotion with tracks like this, like I know this real jus flow real summin I gotta do to, delivery and presence very good...MAKE IT LONGER!!! this was very good, nice to hear this from you, I aint got school tomorow so I can holla atcha tonite ...I got a collab proposition for u...holla atchya boi..ill be on 10:30 pm my time and can you rtf to the track with me Iplicit and Status - no one comes close..
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