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Old 01-28-06, 04:40 AM   #1
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hmm...its aight

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Im gaurenteed to make an impact
run up from behind you,call it a sneek attack
Im bout my paper and pride
Im always ready for war,so I aint goin hide
I feel what you rappin bout and what you sayin
But when it comes from a kid like you,you gotta be playin
Its a simple fact
A bitch is a bitch and 50's a snitch
But who am I to put him on the spot,I aint never been shot
Atleast I know,I'll shoot back,I aint never gunna get got
Enough bout him lets get back to the subject
Give me a pen and paper,Ima be set
5 minutes in the studio,I have an album made
5 minutes alone wid your girl,I bet ima get laid
Tell me,are you really gangster?
Or are you all talk to action,a prankster
You aint never been on the block,you a effin fakester
All you dudes down south,you doin good
But If you come up north,you going see hood
You a lover not a fighter
Aint no pitbull,you a ankle biter
Just cuz I didnt get to you dont meen i feel short
It just meens I retrieved to my block,Incase you try infiltratin the fort
Im full of blood,sweat and tears,All my dream been ruined from fears
This time im aimin at all you,Im homophobic but ill still shoot at you queers

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Old 02-19-06, 12:38 AM   #2
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one good line in the whole drop

Aint no pitbull,you a ankle biter
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Old 02-20-06, 06:29 PM   #3
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damn, i gotta agree with paper on this one.... ur flow was extremely inconsistant, and that's being nice.... step ur game up if u gonna be that cocky
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