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Old 01-15-06, 11:14 PM   #1
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Blastin MCs u might as well call it a damn catastrophe
blowin u up wit bombs u'll need a mask for these
make u crash and bleed get up and im fast to lead
my task is free i open up on fools like a flask for need
pass the weed so i can get fucked up and corrupt
make ya'll erupt and duck i hope i abruptly interrupt
then disrupt ur flow its time to go u rhyme too slow
i'll give u a fine for foes but if u fine as a hoe
i'll let chu go only if it is an urgent emergency
ya'll aint never heard of me these bitches tried to murder me
when i hit switches they become scurred of me
slurred words they cant even talk or walk straight
i stop and lock my fate then continue to stalk my rate
if this is destiny then u dont wanna mess wit me
u wanna die this test is free u betta mention me
too much tension in my mind like a penitentiary

quick nothin special
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Old 01-19-06, 04:24 PM   #2
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ummm..... i guess my feed would be sorta like ur explanation..... nice little flow, i didn't get the last line tho....
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Old 01-24-06, 12:40 AM   #3
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nice and quick. i liked it, it had rhymes all out and threw. pretty good. and for the tupac fan that doesnt know wut a penitentiary would b like, its something white people call the county jail. i believe. tupac talked about it alot even when he was makaveli.
check the song hail mary.

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Old 01-24-06, 01:49 PM   #4
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yea i dont kno why i added the penitentiary line in there lol but w/e, its just another freestyle.
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