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Old 01-28-06, 04:42 AM   #1
jai 0 Loc
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Chill the eff out man,let me do my thing
Let me rap all over this shit,I dont sing
Im ghetto fabolous but i aint into them chains a diamond rings
You know its yo boy Jae Loc
eff wid these girls for a minute,now they wont get off my cock
You havnt done nuttin to get respect
So dont be suprised when you put out an album and get no check
If its me and you going 1 on 1,Ima win the bitch its a sure bet
Your a undergraduate,I got all the criterias met
I dont mean to be rude,but thats who i am
I'll put you in my trunk,drive off a bridge like that dude stan
Me and you can meet up and settle this shit,it sounds like a plan
I took 2 psych test both concluding im mentally deranged
Strong as a pitbull bout to fight,I needa be chained
Bite you in the throat,run off and come back to see your shirt blood stained
Eff green lantern im the evil genious,Hottest kid from upstate doin this
I dont care how much you can bench press,I got a shotgun I can put to your chest
You better be safe and put on your vest,cuz when you dealin with me,you dealin with the best
Ima robbin anything if my mask fit,Ima pound you out and put you in a casket
Noone listin to your shit,when mine comes on the radio these kids blast it
You need to check yourself real quick dude,before I turn this argument into a family feud
You need to go back to the pen and pad before you battle me or elts you'll get chewed
You soft like a chocolate chip cookie
Im a novice,you stuck at rookie
Im reppin that red,so if you wearin blue,Ill kill you like tookie


All you crips don't be offended they juss words,aint tryin to start no internet war,lol
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Old 01-28-06, 06:54 PM   #2
scanz
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that was fucked up bout the last part. tookie and shit, i aitn niether but still. thats like dissin family. a really big one.

besides that flow was kinda off, but good choice on rhymes. i liked some of the multies.
really nuttin special for somethin that long, but pretty good being that ur new.

S to the Z
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