~You niggaz not ready for this I spit wreckless~
~Im the type to get you strangled wit cha neckless~
~Niggaz know what it is I'll fuckin shoot out cha ribs~
~Da Fox bring beef and i aint talking bout meatloaf kid~
~So you bettah get low when i bust~
~Turn yo ass bakk to dust nigga i dont give fuck~
~Just maybe I'll take ya lady~
~And cock her legs bakk like she was having a baby~
~I tried to play it cool but she was acting fool~
~I cant lie i was in it like a deep ass swimming pool~
~Spittin flames man you know my my name man~
~Im like Karl Malone im bout my Mail man~

uppin 4 some feed

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dont sleep on me can i get some feed

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.................................lol

it was ok for a newb- but u need some work on ur multies. nuttin special reallly i guess.

this was aight but like scanz said it was nothing special, u need to put more multies and internal rhyming in it to make it flow smoother. If u want to practice go to the cypher area and just keep droppin freestyles and elevate. Peace.