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02-27-06, 08:06 PM | #1 | |||||||
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yo this is some wierd shit i wrote to this beat..... i can never really use it for a song becuase its kinda wierd and shit.....but yup here it is.....i wrote it to this beat that had 2 verses... the first verse was 22 bars and the second verse was 16......the chorus had a sample of some alien type nioses..... i might record htis song but prolly not...
Enter at your own will but still but still but still Remember that I’m sic Yes I’m ill ill ill ill Have you ever been buried alive by another kind Of life that we feel could never ever survive In this world of strife filled with abnormal fear There everywhere just look in the glare of your bedroom mirror Beware before you stare and actually catch a glimpse That’s where I went wrong and I haven’t been the same ever since Some refuse to believe that people have actually seen Flying machines not created by human beings All of these things that you don’t know Like the locnes monster, big foot and U.F.O’s They’re there but we try to think there not Like the unexplainable circles found in crops Whether or not they say there’s no life beyond the stars Scientist assume that we can survive on mars I show no regards this is no holds bars How can you explain the creatures in those closed jars? Phenomenal excuses provided by area 51 Its not there but has guards ready with there guns Pathological liars say these things can’t exist Conspiracy theories, urban legends, and myths As I awake I can hardly feel my face I can only taste that my organs have been misplaced Eyes and ears sued shut with finger prints erased In this interplanetary space with an unknown race With intentions to make me feel like a fagot Trying to perform anal probe with there hi tech gadgets I wouldn’t have it so they pretended to murder me It was tragic as I hung by my throat vertically I swallowed acid until it basically burned to breathe To the third degree then they began to do surgery All I remember is nothing but black smoke Them branding there initials inside my brain capsule Its was cruel and unusual punishment in another galaxy Facing Brutal fatalities until I was woke gradually As a suffering causality I finally realize I’m running out of oxygen and I’ve been buried alive
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03-01-06, 01:45 AM | #2 | |||||||
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umm yea read this shit...... BITCHES
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03-02-06, 04:13 PM | #3 | |||||||
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223311
left feedback on that,,,,,
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03-02-06, 09:01 PM | #4 | ||||
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shit was pretty good, i do believe there is life beyond the stars. how the bloody hell we going 2 be the only beings in a fuckin galaxy that is a crock of shit.
but still i liked this piece alot it had meaning and u should send that piece to the mother fuckin scientist in 51 and say that they can shove it up there ass tryin' to hide them mother fuckin aliens from us.
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03-03-06, 02:16 AM | #5 | |||||||
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^^ good lookin out...thanks for the love.
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03-03-06, 11:10 AM | #6 | ||||
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Drop another link homie ..but other then that yea this was a pretty decent drop i felt you could have put alittle more emotion in the drop but you nice imagery, and very good feling going into your drop i was really feeling it , nice structure , wordplay and vocab was decent could have been expanded alittle more but overall nice job.
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03-03-06, 08:02 PM | #7 | |||||||
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Becuase it was ment to be a song.... when you hear the song you can hear the emotion and all that,....... just figured it would be stupid to record something that would not be going on my Cd........so i posted it on here...
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