i remeber the days we was chilling on the block, smoking weed in da lot
an everyone in the team was hot, cuz everywhere you go da d's on the spot
but you keep doing your husstle, its a everyday life struggle
didnt understand why da harraisment? cuz it only start trouble
but they hate when you dont have W-2's and you making more then double
cuz they cant figuer out how can you use coke to bubble
and im so hot now a days i dont understand how im not a vapor
an when im with marry-J they try and take-us,
a H.S drop out that learn tree's can make paper
sometime i wounder where life gonna take us, cuz its a ruff rode
matter of fact its the worse rode, it get me in the worse mode
since im so fucking pissed i understand the doctor slang
but when he said a certine name is rang
a certine bell in my head, that had me like what THE FUCK HE SAID?
learn the other day my brother gonna be in the hospitol bed
turn my happyness to burnt out emotion
whats the comotion about, doc said you might wanna take a seat perhapz
i rather not since the doc told me stright up my brother lung collaps
WHAT!!!

its the worse day of my life, lost my best friend from shots at night
everyday we at war like nights, but this aint a gang rivel you wanna fight
the doctors is right, if you dont get help might as well kiss you good-nite
its the worse day of my life, my brother lung collaps N hes pain draining my life!!

stuck in a phaze, face amaze like you gotta be crazy
dont tell me that shit, where he at, doc why you tryin to play me?
burst into tears, drop to the floor wanting to die right here
plez tell me hes gonna live a couple more years?...
as the news soked-in, the hope drop to rock bottom
feel like eminem is calling me, cuz if he split then my wrist i gotta slit
shit why this is happing to me, why can i take that risk? what i gotta do
feeling like GOD did me wrong when im faithfully REPP'IN from he's CREW *R.I.C.H*
i feel like rip'in my own lung out and switching
since the news my body wont stop twitchin
all of a sudden babymoms stop bitch and want to listen





i gotta go!! to much for me right now!

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1st. Im So sorry to hear that, I send my blessing to you and your family....

2nd. This Drop was nice, i can tell this was from the heart, by the way it flowed, I love the story scenario, cuz i can picture it....that just made ya piece...

Ya vocab was decent, just a little etchy in some parts, edit some of the typos....

I can feel what your going thru in the piece, it hit home.,.....

Overall very nice piece....Looking forward to seein more...

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