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07-11-04, 10:29 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
oh aight didn't see this till now........ *checkin' in* VOTED ON!!!!: Calamity .VS. E-Dubz *The~Star* .VS. ~Genicide~ L.I. .VS. Miss.Lyricist SPuL .VS. Mjust23 Durmil .VS. Apotheosis Virt .VS. MARVOLoUsJ1009
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07-12-04, 11:54 AM
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...UnBroken Perfection...
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IP: 5089 F82B
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07-12-04, 08:37 PM
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IP: 5043 32F4
^^^drop once you get online cuz Imma do mine right now..............  shut your mouth kid cuz you talk too much shit, die from being constipated~ putting a "X" as your fuckin' title is the only way you can be highly rated~ 1st Line Explanation: i'm basically saying that his mouth is like his ass..... and shit comes out of it.....get it????talk shit?????? 2nd Line Explanation: well "X" rated basically means for adults only and in movies I believe that is the highest rating around???????? blah whatever not feeling this but it'll do I guess.....
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07-13-04, 10:15 AM
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...UnBroken Perfection...
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IP: B46D 8021
He's from Canada i didnt that was a dope hood
Going to class is the only way you can get hard-wood ^^I dont think i need to explain this^^ |
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07-13-04, 11:01 AM
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retired.
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IP: CD83 3BB9
Second punch sucked, but at least was nice and compact. The concept was nice... but you just blew it on the execution. It needed a way better set up.
To both of you: 1 punch per bar. Stop trying to use 2, it makes you either ocme stretched, or come weak. For$aken... the second line was nice and witty. Took the battle for you. Never again post an explanation. The first line had nothing to do with the punch and was played anyway. Use better setups. v/ for
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07-13-04, 01:11 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: C3CE 96D1
Good Battle y'all........Breakdown
Forsaken.......good setup, nice meta, an solid punch, thats the formula to a solid punch an you executed it very well. Just try to shorten up punch it seemed a little strecthed but your meta more than made up or that, good drop...give ya 8/10 BXP..........you almost had a hard personal there but you messed up badly, first you had a typo in the setup, then you followed that with a horrible punch. Only thing you needed was some rewording an you could have took this one easy, I give ya 5/10 Vote: Forsaken
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07-13-04, 02:48 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: DB8D 5EE9
This Was Pretty Nice Battle Quick B/d
ForSaken- shut your mouth kid cuz you talk too much shit, die from being constipated~ putting a "X" as your fuckin' title is the only way you can be highly rated~ LOL Nice Punch 8.4/10 Understood Whole Way... Bxp He's from Canada i didnt that was a dope hood Going to class is the only way you can get hard-wood Couldve Got More creative Wit The Hardwood.... 7/10 winner-Forsaken
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07-13-04, 03:05 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: 4289 77F4
For$aken - your punch was nice...but set up line should have been so stretched....just set up the punch....dont try and make two punches....it dont help at all....but creative personal....very nice....and dont explain that much lmao....give it a 6.9/10....
B.X.P - Meta was decent....but same wit u....set up the punch!....dont make two punches....flow was better.... but he hit harder....thats what counts the most....give this a 5.1/10.... Vote - For$aken
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07-13-04, 03:07 PM
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Custom Vet
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IP: 1DEB 308A
shut your mouth kid cuz you talk too much shit, die from being constipated~
putting a "X" as your fuckin' title is the only way you can be highly rated~ Though the first line wasn’t that original, it still made me laugh. I liked it, and the second line was nice too. Tight flow and wordplay also. He's from Canada i didnt that was a dope hood Going to class is the only way you can get hard-wood Uh... Hate to say this, but this was kinda lame. The flow was basic and I suppose you meant desk when you wrote hard-wood. Oh well. vote/Forsaken
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07-13-04, 03:44 PM
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The Light
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IP: 46A9 07D1
FOrsaken: lol.. gotta say, that was pretty original.. maybe not the first line, but you oput a flip on it and it made it ok.. but the second line is what did it for you lol.. X rates.. nice punch...
8/10 BXP:well.. your first line was leading us up to the punch, but you let it down with the school punch. it was kind of weak.. like first line had no afect forreal.. and the second line was ajab.. needed to come a lot harder to beat ^his punch.. 6/10 Vote: For$aken
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07-13-04, 04:08 PM
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Blow Me
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IP: FE43 899A
alright... let me break this down... forsaken not a very good punch.. coulda came harder.. but BXP that was a weak punch... soo pretty much forsaken ripped this kid... so my vote goes to him
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07-13-04, 08:31 PM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4C49 64C6
forsaken had a nice punch.....seen similar stuff to what he said but it worked well because it was a personal & ACTUALLY affected his opponent. I didnt feel BXP, I get the punch but u needed to set it up alot better.
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07-13-04, 10:59 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
i guess I win I have eight votes from my counting................................
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07-14-04, 11:09 AM
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That's Gangsta
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IP: 970D 9C87
shut your mouth kid cuz you talk too much shit, die from being constipated~
putting a "X" as your fuckin' title is the only way you can be highly rated~ this line was decent i was feelin' it..... but it should of been worded better.....second line hit ok first line was a good set up.......lol its funny that so far this is one of the better punches ive seen so far in this tourny He's from Canada i didnt that was a dope hood Going to class is the only way you can get hard-wood this did not really make sense and it wasw kinda weak......you need to up your punches fam naybe if you worded it a lil bit differently maybe you might of toook this but you ruined your whole point lol vote: FOrs
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