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04-12-03, 03:30 PM | #1 | ||||||
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white rapper
IP: 65ED F51A
My rhymes r sophisticated enough for a scientist
But u can understand them I can promise this From the glory to the glory to the money to the money I was always were. Were it was sunny I didn’t have to grow up in a rough neighborhood And I didn’t drop out of school I kept it cool Especially on the mic Get shot at I don’t know what that’s like So the only thing I have in common with the average rapper is skill And the way I talk might have appeal Put I’m the average white boy out of the burbs I didn’t grow up freestlying on my friend’s curbs My parents had jobs they rolled in the dough Now I am doing it 4 the way I can flow Y is that bad I don't know don’t u think that that’s sad I had 2 have a bad child hood to rap Or better yet I would have 2 b black I did ball in the playgrounds I no this But they were in Trumbull wit white kids U no all we did was shoot And when he did sumting nasty we didn’t hoot We didn’t have r du rags in the air Because we didn’t care Next point wins that's all that matter And getting into a college and having an Alma matte I got all right grades and I didn’t flunk out And now when I rhyme I don’t pout I just keep it real And tell you how I feel I got every meal I got everything from breakfast to dinner But I have 2 admit I was a little sinner But I kept rhyming instead or killing people dead When I had a test I made sure I read NOT But I did formulate the plot To get out of school And go 2 Florida 2 swim in a pool I haven’t lived it yet but I will Not a straight A student but still I will pay da bill when i go to a bar and grill And have a burger with fries And I paid I didn’t cum up wit lies So 2 end it here I had a good life adn im white y do u care So that's my story and I’m out tell me what u think gimme a shout Last edited by da lyrical ninja : 04-12-03 at 03:43 PM. |
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04-12-03, 03:37 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: C458 8FB0
try to keep the bars same length as much as possible... not a bad attempt though
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04-12-03, 03:38 PM | #3 | |||||||
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man u were bitin some shit outta 8 mile there man
"scar and kill, bar and grill" "im outy, now u know all there is to know about me" that was just changed a very little bit plus the rhyme scheme was simple and so were the words come up with some of ur own shit |
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04-12-03, 03:41 PM | #4 | ||||||
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im sry if i did, i didnt notice it man, when sumtin fits or ryhmes things cum 2 me i just write em down, if i truely did i didnt mean 2 man ima change it right now thne ll just edit it
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04-12-03, 03:45 PM | #5 | ||||||
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yeah..just sorta noticed that you are trying to be to much like em,
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04-12-03, 03:46 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 65ED F51A
hes my rolemodel when it cums 2 rap i have the same way of rhyin and i sound like him its weird, i shulda knows it was stolen im mad man
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04-12-03, 03:48 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 65ED F51A
i got another song its liek a depresed song here it is
When darkness falls upon me im not in control of my life i feel like grabbin a knife and goin slice it cant b dis way i cant feel this way i wish this was just another day its not cool feelin like this ur moody sad and very pissed u cant even put all ur poblems on one list its like happiness left and blew u a kiss but da kissed missed mide as well just punched u wit its fist there aint nuttin 2 luk 4ward 2 just more pain, what else is new u wanna give up and call it quits cuz ders always sumtin in ur way like a wall of bricks u wish ur life was like what u c in flicks perfect, happy and everything in between but really its mean, glutany, and greed and the pain and sorrow grows in u like u feed it u wanan beat it but u cant defeat it Chorus: u wanna beat it but theres no way no how and u don’t have a way out rite now and it wont let u get up cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get up and jump It’s a new day But u still feel da same way Feelin like death is certain Like sum1 is closin da curtain And darkness falls upon u It sneaks up and surprises u and yealls out BOO And u have no way out So u start 2 pout Ull do ne thing to get away So u get on ur knees and start 2 pray Hopin god is rite there hearing what u say Hoping he understands u and says ok Then u start 2 c da light And u no every thing will be alright Now u don’t even wanna go to da knife U start luvin and appreciatin life u wanna beat it but theres no way no how and u don’t have a way out rite now and it wont let u get up cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get and jump |
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04-12-03, 03:51 PM | #8 | ||||||
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Ooooh Text Choruses Are So Guuuuuuuuully....
Ooooooooh |
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04-12-03, 03:52 PM | #9 | ||||||
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guly?
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04-12-03, 03:53 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: BC2A A050
"the white rapper" my god...
You bit. You actually suck...omfg...this was sad.. sorry, I shouldn't rag on you, but give up... |
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04-12-03, 03:55 PM | #11 | ||||||
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u have 2613 posts Bruklor
and u havent battled once, y the fuq r u at this site if u dont battle pussy, can u even fuqin rap? and ill abtlle u and fuq u up bitch |
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04-12-03, 03:56 PM | #12 | ||||||
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Oooooooooooh J's Merking
Oooooooooooh..Haha Hasn't Eminem Got Enough Wannabes As It Is? |
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04-12-03, 03:57 PM | #13 | |||||||
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^^^hahahahahahahaa
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04-12-03, 03:57 PM | #14 | ||||||||
one wink
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lmfao, I don't battle you fucking Eminem cock sucking wanna be. I can rap, ...and it saddens me that you are at RB rapping, where I rap. I shouldn't have to be around wackness like you. |
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04-12-03, 03:58 PM | #15 | ||||||
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Take A Good Look At Me, If It's Time To Face Your Fears
Tha Day You Beat Me, Someone On The Simpsons Will Age A Year who have u beaten man?? |
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