chron left feed on appex track, and the AI diss track thing...

hook - Ike
1st Verse - Ike
2nd Verse - Chron


http://chron.dmusic.com/


word.....

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Hook starts....ain't feeling that shit my nigga.

I'm starting to feel Ike delivery now, you aint have your swagger on this one...that 8 mile line was ill

Chronix rode the beat nicely in his verse, lines was ok, but shit sounded good on this track.

Wasn't that hot overall...but yeh niggas is on my team.

GREATEST TRACK EVER!

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word yo, A-Team

hook kinda coo, i dont really think you fit the whole crunk scene ike on this song...
your delivery needed to be a bit more crunk, lil bit more wild and shit..like you was bouncin wit lil jon, lol.
your verses lyrics is hot, the flow is real smooth...just work on deliveyr im thinking, otherwise real real nice.

im liking chron on this
if only his quality was a bit better, his shit would be madd nice
flow is real smooth, lyrics is str8
def liking the delivery though, i think it fits the crunk scene real nicely

overall yall had a hot track, go hit up me and mad knights track...and go a-team

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Chron i told you what i thought on AIm..

Verse 1 - Pretty Nice..content was straight...flow was good and the emotion for hte beat was there...kinda simple at times though..the only hting i would change would be your wording and such..pretty nice start...

Hook - Okay this hook is nice IMO because it does have that little club feel but its still short and sweet, at least its not Repetative as fuck like al il jon chorus...

Chron - Pretty nice..i love that richard pryor line you know me..lol..but the quality is kinda gay..you know you need to turn that mic down or something cuz that little distortion bothers me...overall though the content, flow, emotion was pretty straight...

overally - 8/10 nice job..

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Checked it...............Your Delivery Is DOpe As Fuck Ike

Flows On Point

Emotinos good

Liked the Lyrics

Presence Is Dope

Hooks Nice

The Beats Dope Haha


Chron

Flows Nice

Emotins Good

Delivery Is Nice As Hell

Lyrics Koo

The Track sounds Muffled Tho


Overall :7/10

Keep Up

Plz Rtf On My Collab With Decree-

What Made Me.Ft Decree

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OYD MAFIA

not feelin the hook or the beat that much..

feelin Ike's rhyme scheme.
like his voice


Chron's verse, I was likin a bit more than Ike's.
I specifically like the big punisher bits.
thats punishment with a capital P.
Lol, that part was dope.

overall, a solid track, although I heard parts where both of you messed up in your verse. Like, the flow fell short.
it was all good though

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R.I.P. Bodie

IF YOU LIKE THIS TRACK, VOTE US FOR FEATURED TRACK OF THE WEEK


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=211107&page=2

not feelin beat much...chorus is iight

nice come in ..good lyrics delevery is on point,nice verse

2nd dude..good shit mannice pun lines..delevery is on,good voice,lyrics was good

good shit overall

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

i hate the hook ike ok i dont think this track was that good doesnt fit you flow is too laid back not crunk i heard 1 dope line though props chron you were too loud in spots but u fit this track better
overall ok track but i was expecting more from ike

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Listening...

Beat is pretty coo...

Hook...not really feeling it...doesnt seem to blend with the beat...

Ike...Damn...nice lyrics...and fuck you at for sounded so much like Eminem lmfao...delivery is dope...flow was pretty good...good verse. We gotta do a collab.

Hook...same...

Chron...quality was a little bit distorted...flow was a little bit choppy I found...lyrics are pretty miainstream...but good shit...keep it up...

Pretty good track...keep up the good work.

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Soundclick
NEW Myspace

this was definitely on some laid back shyt... i was actually kinda feeling this... sumn to pump in da ride gettin blazed with ya boys, nah mean?...lol


Ike:

flow was actually pretty good... didn't hear where ya fell off at all like some of the other kats said... but yeah... ya need to be a lil more grimy with ya verse if ya gon use a beat like this... ya voice is kinda high so ya gotta get amped up and deliver like UPS , feel me
lyrics were aiight....

Chron: definitely feeling ya flow on this better... you're suited for this kinda beat... sounds like ya average crunk track with a lil versatility in da flow... good job... glad ya didn't yell "Oh-Kaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy" or "YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH H!!!!"...lmao... definitely need to do sumn about that hiss on ya vocals, though... pretty much da only real flaw i saw on this track...

i, personally, woulda flippped it on some twista shyt to this beat... it's too slow for me so i'd have spiced it up with that kinda style...feeling it as an "album-type" track but the task is to make it a "hit track".... this would be one of them supoorting role tracks on a decent album... good shyt y'all... stay up

PS... Per Se > A-Team..lol.... j/p....lmao.... or am I?...lol

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CLICK DA SIGGY

This song is not really my style...Its too southern crunk for me. The hook could really be better cause im not really feelin the need no introduction thing. But ya flow is on point and the beat is bumpin fa real. Ya delivery is coo and I think that the quality could be a lil better tho.

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Conscious soundclick


Conscious' Myspace

this track aint that bad......

Hook - not really feelin it but it's decent for the concept of the song

Ike- dope verse, ya lyrics were strate, but wut gets me is ur delivery man...good shit

Chron - needs better quality, but flow and delivery is strate........

Overall nice drop.....keep em comin........

pz

~1~

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