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no dick ridden

don't bitch up

aight, lets go u piece of shit

like making the band your bitch ass rejected like dylan/
come on rap battles with a bitch ass icon/
the ground is melting in the mist while spit this/
you just another fucker on my emcee's to bitch list/
I love to bam-bam u bitch ass barney Ruble/
u dried up aids infested cum bubble/
did i say barney rubble I meant barney fife/
let me "nip it in the bud" and break ur ass off sumthing nice/
I bet u didn't know your lady was creepin/
Im a US. sailor so i let the bitch see sum "seamen"/
call me a piece of shit so u want to go there/
fuck ur rap status i got longer nut hair/
I don't know if i should spray raid or "bitch-be-gone"/
take a lesson from bb king cause "the thrill is gone"/

if u were smart u'd check ur name, it ain't legit//
read between the lines, ur named after takin a shit//

get these mainstream broadway rappers out of my face//
I'll slap you wit my penis and ask how it tastes//

gangstas let bullets spit, so go on and do it bitch//
Bowelle ain't about nothin, he's obviously full of shit//(bowelles help u take shits)

I'm bound 4 fame & glamour//
with punches harder than hammers//

dig big as a pissed Bruce Banner//
ur mom went 4 a ride n it slammed her//
(Bruce Banner is the incredible hulk when he gets mad)

you must be stupider than a fuckin blonde//
my punches hit hard, so they hit u, ur dad, n ur mom//

u porno star startling, sperm gargling fag//
u probably did get breast feed properly 2 busy goin 4 ur dad's//

i'mma bout 2 murder ur rhymes n leave 'em lyin in heaven//
n put shit so sick n ur computer it'll crash like the planes n 9-11//






(no offense)

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this battle was allriight wasnt the the greatest though both was allright wordplay was bowelle's strong point in this battle but in flow structure i wazsnt feelin him..so imma have to give this battle to oni for a better overall verse

i voted so return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126598

uppin 4 votes
i'll vote honestly on urs 2

his flow was way betta adn the punches he served up was hott!!

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uppin 4 oni

uppin

oni
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

bow
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

v/ oni

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well lets see oni structure was the best. so my vote will go to oni becuase he had some kick ass attacks and hits on his appoinents.
so my vote goes to oni.

oni
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10
Humor 6/10

bow
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

v/ oni

you had better punches and i was feeling your verse alot more man.....keep elevating and you should be fine

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