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DoCE {psswrd- "Morph-(E)-us"}

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up for days with voices in my fuckin brain
stuck with glazed eyes spaced out thinkin about nuttin plain
drugs got me wrapped, plus they open me up
4five and DoCE yall must know that we fucked
pills with brand names keep me sane and non hostile
text raps apostle spillin thoughts through my nostrils
spit then i got you
historical raps uncovered only by diggin for fossils
words flow from my lips as im lickin my tonsils
chew hard on my new card, i said it, fuck a debit
my mind can edit my credit
so basically i buy shit then go back and reset it
see my card is used to crush pills, AHHHH how the rush feels
but i don't sniff shit
i always walk around with some bills stickin out of my nose as i huff rails
follow dust trails and i can get back home safely
back to safety
where i can wait patiently for another drug to take me
get this i never done smack cuz needles make me sick
but if i could stand blood best believe i'd take that shit
actually... im all talk like when ya sittin in therapy
i would never shoot up and only sniff shit when its neccesary
always ready like the secondary, safely playin my position
waitin on a shipment straight wonderin where my bitch went
nervous as shit, gettin paranoid and listen then hear my chick in the kitchen
cookin up a dish of my favorite shit but i won't eat it
you never eat when ya like me, i guess thats just how E is
breaks are a must, take it on a weekly basis or ya fucked
you'll end up skinny as shit with a brain replaced with mush
i fucked with all type of drugs except for coke and H
but if it makes someone feel at home and safe
let them make up their mind and blow their bank
drugs don't fuck up a soul, just the body that holds its place



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45 {pswrd- "(§P33D)an0~ Rvs"}

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If i get any higher ima need to breath thru a nebulizer/
Pass out 4 i pass up a substance ina circumfrance,uncut 2get meth vets spun n wired//
Puffin mindfucz n snortin stuff cut up in2 fine line rows of sum poison/
done grams up till i cramped up n chanted in tounges i dont unda stand but spoke in my voices//
Ud neva get as high as da mind can unless u smoke L's as 4five been/
OOPS! didnt mean 2sniff ur line kid, was jus sein if ur line smelled like mine did//
If geekass peeps from rehab keep askin 'Where do u think u'd be at if u O.D n die sir?'.../
I answer'@an unmarked graveyard ina pinebox dugdeep in some dirt n fertilizer'//
When da sess'gone id geta bong n scrape up resin balls da size of tennis balls/
B4 i puff,id write my name, #,n addy ona pad w/me jus incase i forget it all//
4da rest of yall wantin it kept within da law.. theres vicoden, valium, prozac n all that/
..bet ud get tore back,keep popN em n chase it down w cognac till u fall flat//
Doce n me be kinda high from.. potant dope that rockstarz O.D n die from/
Chemical drugs jus wont fuc yo spine up n vegetable-ize ya mind plus..UH nevamind go try some//
I'll be ON-lines with or w/o a web internet connection/
If it aint meth or bless den im loaded on anti phycotics,n anti biotics in prescripted medacine//
If u see a 10ft 2 tall rabid tooth goofball den u musta dip'd thru da embalmin loop fog/
Drugs,Use all.not as Dmx did or till weightloss has u lookin like a starvin snoopdog//

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

this shit was hot...from the looks of this it looks as if you just transferred here from another site cause I know damn well you ain't no newbie...I liked the multiez and y'all druggie mufuckaz can stick to that topic like nuttin'...lol...

i liked that shit very very dope lots of multiez i didn't understand parts of the second verse but it was ill

yo i appreciate the feedback from y'all good lookin out n shit.. ^^

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

yo, basic... the first guy seemed like half the time he was just rhymin' words... you're try'n to get too complex when u don't yet have the skill... my tip to both is keep it simple stupid.. lol... the second guy 4five.. you had the better verse, seemed you knew more about the topic, most wouldn't've picked up on it, but I do alot of drugs.. I liked the lne "OOPS! didnt mean 2sniff ur line kid, was jus sein if ur line smelled like mine did//",.... shit was funny as fuck.. I gotta do that to someone... lol.. you also seemed to try to be too complex in ur bars.. it fucks up the flow, also try to keep the lines around the same length, 8-16 syllables.. depending on if it's fast or slow... peace, keep elevatin'

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^ trust me yo NOBODY flows like 4five...it amazes me how people read his text and say it didn't flow but on audio the dude is amazing....I've heard so many of his tracks I got his flow when I read his rhymes so it always suprises me when others don't get it....neway

first dude was iight...nothing spectactular but had a nice rhymescheme n flow was pretty tite.....


^ that was nice as fuck...

4five ripped this as always


lmao that whole section was niceness...

keep this ish up...I never read this before so iono how old it is..but it's dope nonetheless...

peace

^^oops.. lol

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//