Seventeen Footsteps, Thats 9 On Tha Left, 8 Of Tha Right..
I Was Conceieved Through A Maelstrom Of Tha Brightest Night..
A Stygian Of Light, I Must Have Wondered Beyond Tha Margin..
And Fallen Off Tha Page, Where I Find 900 Tyrants Marching..
Laughing And Mind Charging For Tha Encounter Wit Tha Phoenix..
Wooden Crucifix's Burried In Jerusalem Are Tha Keys Of Helix..
Tha Means Of Siccness Are Hidden Within Tha Heinous Brains..
I Wait Here And Hope As Tha Cosmic Evolution Finally Rains..
From Tha Creation Of Bethlehem To Tha Decimation Of Acropolis..
I Search Ensnared In This Apocalypse For Tha Lost Metropolis..
Walking Tha Deserts Of Egyptions Myths Through Sullen Mists..
Tha Grained Powder Of Tha Pharoahs Now Entombed Inside Crypts..
Tha Uprising Of Tha Triple 6, Seen It All Through Omniscience..
Tha Omen Of Fate Is Echoed As Im Tha Only Sole Thats Listening..
Visitor Of Ancient Temples Within Tha Planets Of This Galaxy..
And Other Structures Past Tha Macrocosm, Where I Have Vanity..
Triumph Is Blasphemy, Joined Taoism, Found A Spiritual Vision..
Ritual Division Of Christians Is How I Portraied Imprisoned..
Tha Follower Of Abraham, Isaac And Jacob, Tha Jewish Migrants..
Unified Wit Mosses As Tha Israelites Were Steady Fighting..
Hebrew Diction Was Between Extirpation As Tha Romans Invaded..
Elohim Was Tha Sacred Soul Chosen From Tha Ashes Of Cremated..
Nazarites That Were Found Carbonized Wit Technical Satellites..
Was Once A Worthy Human Travelling From Palatine To Palestine..
Hammer Time From Thor Tha Thunderous, Tha Greek And Roman Gods..
Go To War Over Who Should Admin This Globes Profound Cogs..
Im Still Living, Tenebrous Cloak Watching Tha Worlds Monarchies..
Eternal Trip Through Mysterious Epochs Is What Tha Homage Brings..
Seen All Tha Icons Of Amoral Representations, Tha Beelezebub..
Tha Being Of Darkness From Tha Nether World, Tha Evil Lucifer..
Stayed In Tha Abode Of Icelandic Vikings, Tha Ships Of Pirates..
Tha Eclipse Of Tha Lunar, Tha Sooner It Sent Me Into Hiding..
I Was Existing 5 Days After Tha Creation Of Adam, Tha Noah Era..
Sodom And Gomorrah, Tha Children Of Exodus, Becoming Clearer..
Prospected Tha Lamb Of Jesus, My Lifeline Ends At Infinity..
This Ceaseless Maze, Which Has Pictured All Of Rendered Imagery..

I LIKED THIS ALOT SO IM UPPIN FOR OTHERS TO PEEP


WE MUST HIT A COLLAB

This is nice, you remind me of how I used to spit bout a year bacc, delivering strong vocab and imagery... The concept was deep and infactuated with imagery and figuarative language, playing our a broad scene... The first line was iLL, caught my eye and the knowledge developed throughout, with lines of history... The rhyme scheme was sturdy, internal rhymes and multies pushing through, to give you a good rhythm... Vocab your strongest point obviously, some of the words interesting, I would say tone it down slightly, because a good script is understandable to everyone, work on that because you have the potential to cut into your style... Mrtaphors and slight like of similes always pushed through, it was a good read, interesting, keep dropping the gems...

Peez...

Thanks LOL And RhetoriX For Tha Positive Feedback..

I Appreciate It..

Ya obviously kno ya hisory but was there really any message behind this? technically this drop was superb but it diddnt really say anythin to me. it seemed more of an exercise for ya vocab than sumthin ya really put ya heart into ya kno? im not hatin on this not by a long way cos its well more complex than anythin im writin but im just sayin try and put urself across more. anyway check mine bent politicians aight bro peace

Word I Guess I Was Jus Testing Out My Lyrical Ish..

Thanks For Tha Reply Tho..

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