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07-23-02, 06:17 PM
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~~Tha Reign Drops~~
IP: 07E0 A9F2
Tha Emporer Of A Common Place, Tha Cold Throne Of Lethargy..
Tha Disgruntled Exists, From Tha Hallways I Hear Laughing.. Governing A Crumbling Empire From Tha Voice Of An Inaudible.. Unheard Of In Tha Manner That His Own Actions Talk To You.. Raised Through A Distorted Image, Flowchart Already Planned.. He Cant Control His Own Mind, How Is He Supposed To Rule Land?.. Tha Grains Of Sand, In Proportion To His Managed Village.. So That 9000 Eyes Could Vision It, Tha Decline Christening.. Pillaging From Tha Christmas Tin, A Modern Day Fairy Tale.. If Modern Was Only Tha Forsaken And Day Was Tha Forest Trail.. His High Majesty Even Thought That He Could Breathe In Space.. A Lifetime Of Over Sustenance, Made That Hard On This Place.. More Of A Remissness Than A Place, Let Tha Turth Be Told.. His Authority Over A Beating Metropolis Was Always Gonna Fold.. Like A Slender Pillow, But His Sentiment Seemed Enigmatic.. Tha Creation Of A Self Destructing Device, He'd Be Tha Plastic.. Thats Contained Beyond Tha Steely Chassis On Tha Outside.. His Love For Tha Job Decreased As Tha Inductible Crowd Died.. Lost In His Own Planet Of Tha Apes, But Replace Tha Apes.. With Unexcited Inhabitents Who This King Is Scared To Face.. His Perfection Was Cataclysmic, Tha Catalyst Of Fallacy.. Tha Director Of Tha Nest That Diminishes Like Tha Hornet Bee.. Tha Monarchy Physically Depreciates Brick Sand By Brick Sand.. Commands Ignored, So All Words Are Worthless As They Withstand.. Tha Orders Of A Superhuman With No Powers And No Appeal.. No Creditability, Hes Like Tha Human King Of Tha Ant Hill.. No Right Hand Man, No Right Way Of Being Tha Man He Used To.. Tha Malefactor Of History, Asking Himself "But Who Knew?".. How About Tha Whole Population, News Spread During Slumber.. While You Were Relaxing And Up Cropped Another Two Wonders.. That Makes 9, But You Were Too Busy Being Nobody In A Shadow.. Fallen Off Tha Hierarchy, Climbing Tha Shoot, Not Tha Ladder.. Finally Left Tha Castle, But Only To Look For Lost Ovations.. Tha Towns Center In Bad Weather, Is Where Ended Tha Paving.. Insanity Is Brain Storming, Following Tha Path Towards Omega.. You Were On Tha Wrong Track To Start Off With Like A Quaker.. |
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07-23-02, 10:07 PM
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IP: 4913 2E2C
once again, good shit here demik.. ..don't know why this is slept on, but this was very good.. ..opener was koo, i liked tha second line.. ..
"His High Majesty Even Thought That He Could Breathe In Space.. A Lifetime Of Over Sustenance, Made That Hard On This Place.. More Of A Remissness Than A Place, Let Tha Turth Be Told.. His Authority Over A Beating Metropolis Was Always Gonna Fold.. Like A Slender Pillow, But His Sentiment Seemed Enigmatic.. Tha Creation Of A Self Destructing Device, He'd Be Tha Plastic.." ^^ very nice.. ..feelin this part tha most, especially tha bolded lines.. .. "With Unexcited Inhabitents Who This King Is Scared To Face.. His Perfection Was Cataclysmic, Tha Catalyst Of Fallacy.." ^^ nice.. .. "With Unexcited Inhabitents Who This King Is Scared To Face.. His Perfection Was Cataclysmic, Tha Catalyst Of Fallacy.." ^^ liked this part as well, overall this was ill.. ..i like your style and creativity, keep it up ¤TwOs¤ |
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07-23-02, 10:23 PM
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IP: F77C 8691
I'll tell you why its gettin slept on... cuz i did'nt understand ONE WORD he said, lol, its cool though, im suppose to have this white dude comeover and translate it to me...
PEACE |
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07-24-02, 08:22 PM
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IP: 15EF FBEA
Thanks For Tha Feedback Remy..
LOL @ Nino's Comments.. |
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07-25-02, 05:10 PM
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IP: 4C49 64C6
DoWN..
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07-25-02, 06:45 PM
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IP: D030 F658
DAMN, you got iLL vocabulary as usual
I aint gonna quote anythin cause I couldnt explain tha meaning of what most of your vocabulary means Keep spittin that dictionary mentality 1 |
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07-25-02, 11:42 PM
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Tha Young Genius
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IP: 4BB4 A000
Madd Nice...Crazy vocab and creative lyrics...Real Nice...100
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07-26-02, 09:15 PM
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IP: 976E 087B
Thanks For Tha Feedback You Two..
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07-26-02, 09:58 PM
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IP: 60C6 8ADC
sup N-Demik
long time since i peeped any of your pieces... where the hell do you get the shit that you come up with? that's my big question for you dawg, damn though, this was nice, i thought this piece was dope as it was, vocab and all... respect peace signed, ~madd |
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07-26-02, 10:52 PM
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IP: A4DC 9044
yo u got some madd crazy vocab so all i can say is to keep doin u
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07-27-02, 01:19 AM
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IP: 98F7 023C
WHO PUT WHO IN DA WHAT NOW?
yo nino can i borrow yo translator? you came hella strong but there was just a lot of shit that i just didnt undastand in dis piece.... what i could put together was madd fuckin nice though...... good drop.....peep some of mah shit...... 1 |
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07-27-02, 01:21 AM
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IP: 1769 3B0F
ill peace no doubt
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07-27-02, 06:46 AM
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IP: 48B0 16C3
Yo, N - it's me from RnR. Nice drop, I'm loving your expert vocabulary and complexity, the flow was perfect for the amount of content that you include. This is a dope piece and I'm really feeling your skill, it's dope to see a young person like yourself with so much talent. Keep it up and keep dropping.
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