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Old 10-24-03, 01:11 PM   #1
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~~~Aint no stopping Death~~~

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jes lettin yall know, if u see a line ending with "~" and the other line starts with "~" is jes indicating that theres not really a pause between the lines, or a really really short pause

ight

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My mind's filled with hate thoughts that create plots to raid spots~
~And generate shots from the .38 tossed~
~To me, from my man Jay who've slaid more heathens
Than Buffy the Slayer does creature-like demons
Seasons of bloodshed and chaos purges my heart
Till a luminous beam descends from the heavens dividing the darkness apart~
~In two halves returning a state of equilibrium to my soul
My cerebrum cannot hold 'n' when medievel drums start to roll~
~The man on the pale horse has arrived to remove all forms of Godliness~
~Bringing with him, the other three horsemen of Apocalypse
Aint no stopping this....we all gots to die...
So say your last prayers...*click click*....goodbye


if ya'll really ponder on it, ull get the story.....
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Old 10-24-03, 05:04 PM   #2
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can i get some feedback on this joint man, would really appreciate it
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Old 10-24-03, 09:38 PM   #3
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bro i was definetly feelin that, maybe its just that it flowed really
well wit the beat that i was listening too, but i think that was tight yo,
keep droppin,
[]Deace
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Old 10-24-03, 10:56 PM   #4
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thnx fo tha feed, lets get some more feed on this shit
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Old 10-25-03, 05:09 PM   #5
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hit dis post up yo

dont sleep on this
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Old 10-25-03, 05:22 PM   #6
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I was feeling what you was writing about. .I think your structure needs some work man. .Your vocab was very good & the highlight of this piece. .The rhymes were basicly complex. .I mean no inters of multis but long words. .no doubt it flowed well . . Props
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