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kEtCh~22 to spit first
8-10 lines
no hate
no crew
no d/r votes
no feedin
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god luck

Never Fail in the ring, like Daly I Got a Whale of a swing,
From the Atmosphere spit at ya ear & Hail To The King,
Don't even have ta Put Ya In Ya Place..You Stay Wak,
Infact, I'll fukin Roll ya Down Tha Street cuz Ya Games Crap(s),
Pursue Me B. Neva!! got a store-of-teck's-&-Muh-Mills-is-Scary,
This Fagg's 'Goin Down in Rank' Like Oral-sex-in-da-Military.
Im DYnmite Tight and Dawg Im Takin Over Position's,
U betta Think Twice bout yo SIckness Like a Siamese Physicians.
Trust...i ain't bluffin-ma-Cleva-Hooks-On-Lock,
Its Like i got E.S.P, cuz right now u prolly sayin......


Peep his Sig^^^^

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lol nice finisher.................................

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Accepting my challenge?… dog that’s a bit reckless
…I’ll show u ya own reflection…
leaving you on your on death list!
My lyrics leave you ‘cursed’…you ketch my drift?
…even if u were Jay Z…
you couldn’t produce a ‘gift’!
join old RB…so u can be the wackest on both boards
…7-0? He must be a dj…
the way he is fiddling with records!
Before you can even blink…im gunna rip your eye out
…sorry to use a gay joke but…
you posted in the Dicks 2 Ride tryouts!
I don’t even need to finish…cos your already diminished
…you steal a crews name…
then you cant even get in it!

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uppin............................................. ....

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verse was ok...but ya last line is garbage..check the crew forum...kina kills ya closer when ya wrong...lol

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yo ok

kingz- man both of you had nice as verses word this was a hot battle man and it showed this might be the text battle of the mounth word but i was felling 22's punches alil bit more than yours and his personal was better than you just makeing fun of him wanning to be in a crew word

v/22

return the favor link in the sig

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Never Fail in the ring, like Daly I Got a Whale of a swing,
From the Atmosphere spit at ya ear & Hail To The King,
this was bad..
Don't even have ta put Ya In Ya Place..You Stay Wak,
Infact, I'll fukin Roll ya Down Tha Street cuz Ya Games Crap(s),
this was pretty decent..
Pursue Me B. Neva!! got a store-of-teck's-&-Muh-Mills-is-Scary,
This Fagg's 'Goin Down in Rank' Like Oral-sex-in-da-Military.
Laugh: had me going..
Im DYnmite Tight and Dawg Im Takin Over Position's,
U betta Think Twice bout yo SIckness Like a Siamese Physicians.
Clever punch..
Trust...i ain't bluffin-ma-Cleva-Hooks-On-Lock,
Its Like i got E.S.P, cuz right now u prolly sayin......
'nuttin-has-eva-looked-so-hot'
Good quote but rest was meh!
6-10..

Accepting my challenge?… dog that’s a bit reckless
…I’ll show u ya own reflection…
leaving you on your on death list!
wtf this was bad last line.. 1+2 were aitte..
My lyrics leave you ‘cursed’…you ketch my drift?
…even if u were Jay Z…
you couldn’t produce a ‘gift’!
this was a quality punch
join old RB…so u can be the wackest on both boards
…7-0? He must be a dj…
the way he is fiddling with records!
This was dope had me like woah!
Before you can even blink…im gunna rip your eye out
…sorry to use a gay joke but…
you posted in the Dicks 2 Ride tryouts!
oh shit that ripped him bad
I don’t even need to finish…cos your already diminished
…you steal a crews name…
then you cant even get in it!
punch of the mattch if its true..
8-10

Kingz had harder punches and they were consistant..
\/0te Kingz..

Struc- 22
punches- 22
r.s. - 22
creativity- 22
nuff said flat out.
v/22

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Return the favor please if you do it then thank you.

Aight, both were very good with the punches. But King's punches hit harder. Really good battle, flow on both sides wasn't bad. But 22, you should improve your structure coz it's wack.

V/Kingz

Hit this up in return and I'll come back and poll vote:

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...450#post1333450

Peace

ayo ketch got to add kingz to his merked list.
flow:ketch
style:ketch
opener:kingz
closer:ketch
punches: Ketch
personal kingz
big up to both

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yo ok

kingz- man both of you had nice as verses word this was a hot battle man and it showed this might be the text battle of the mounth word but i was felling 22's punches alil bit more than yours and his personal was better than you just makeing fun of him wanning to be in a crew word

v/22

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