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01-05-05, 10:22 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Pen in My Hand
IP: 1502 6D57
I been shiftin minds splittin spines and spittin rhymes
To lift the load to get what I feel is mine But I got a cloud of doubt stompin it out I got apprehensiveness that screams and shouts But without, my vision and verses, Livin is worthless unless I'm given a purpose Creatin a style to work with as I'm fine on the surface But my mind reminds my heart how much things can hurt it Philosophies, thoughts, dreams, prophicies, shots, screams Haunting society and me as I wait to internally bleed This voice inside my head needs to hurry and leave This venom need to seep, this danger needs to feed Upon the souls of my enemies yet I'm friendly at times Until someone takes a step across that enemy line Imagery and cyanide collide twistin and shiftin inside 2 Faces unite under the same title Both waitin to be put on paper, yet im expected to be the writer One minute its purity white lights and certainty Next minute hurtin any walkin form with stealin their security These lyrics are my escape, you hear it and think I'm insane I carry no guns, no money, no bling I carry this pen and a notebook, deep in though and hoping The sidewalks are gray and the sky is blue The grass is green the sun's horizon is quite a view And there's color and life in me cause I'm a poet Yet dark and light cancel eachother out, incase you didnt know it It's a prism of expression, a division split by obsession To be the most lethal and advanced lyrical weapon Yet still I'm driven to do what what I was destined Which is preach to this world, my beliefs and my theories It's still sayin Chingy isn't hip hop when I need relief or I'm weary And apathetic bout this drawn out earth, it dont revolve round the sun It revolves around materialistic worth, and the blade and the gun Or the lack of such prestige Corpora America shot its self and gave the kids a disease Flooded and trapped, faces enshrouded and vague The country doesn't have pride, its got doubt and mental plague Well I got a pencil and page and a fistful of rage I hate society and society hates me But I can get back at em and myself with the passions that made me By defnin when Im rhymin the threats to my safety Polution, drug distribution, Usin media to let talentless losers to make money through it Hip hop is danglin by a minute, embodiment Of real emcees who would write all day just to die for it Its construed misused raped and stapled to money, made ugly By these greedy self enfatuated pricks Makes me wanna burn my radio television and computer for a quick fix My mind can't escape hip hop blasphemy The lead is my only defense against this catastrophe When I drop you see, I'm pop's enemy stoppin it properly Passionately, to those of you who deserve to be thrashed by me I owe you some gratitude to be true and to address you aptly You fuel the fury that keeps my mic presence happy And lastly, to you so called haters who misunderstand It ain't your fault, your ignorance is your escape from demand And you're all left wasted cause you tasted this pen in my hand -Chaotic Stealth |
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01-05-05, 10:27 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 1502 6D57
Recent replies I've made recently:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170403 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170390 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170549 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170433 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170309 Uppin . |
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01-05-05, 11:11 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 003B D7F0
Shit is sick fool , long as fuck but dope as fuck as well but thanx for the fees jus repayin the favor so.. yeah shit was dope 7.5 /10 keep it up mang!
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01-06-05, 12:05 AM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 042D 7583
dayum homie that was sick u gotta keep doing yo thing hit me up if u ever wanna collab i give this a 8.5/10 stay up homie
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01-06-05, 07:27 AM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1502 6D57
thanks for the feed yall for real, 'preciate it, yeah we'll collab sometime LG
uppin' |
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01-06-05, 05:58 PM | #6 | |||||||
tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: CC90 B6E6
good drop dawg.......i was feelin da 1st few lines tha best. great multis.
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01-07-05, 11:07 PM | #7 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 7998 CF0F
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01-09-05, 04:52 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 7998 CF0F
yet again.. uuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnn
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01-10-05, 10:35 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 5652 67E4
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01-12-05, 10:52 PM | #10 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1521 E0E2
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01-13-05, 11:11 PM | #11 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1521 E0E2
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01-13-05, 11:14 PM | #12 | ||||
Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 23A8 883C
I liked it, it was pretty good but keep workin tho homes and you're vocab and imagry was pretty good but work on ur multis more homes.
7.7/10 |
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01-15-05, 09:55 AM | #13 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: B327 D362
thanks for the feed upppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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01-15-05, 10:31 AM | #14 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 46C2 FF91
Long ass read but it was worth it...vocab is nice, not too many big-shot words and not too basic either, emotion was good, straight spitting from the core...nice shit man...Keep on doing your thing, props to you...
DQ
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01-17-05, 08:49 PM | #15 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: ED08 2513
thanks for the feed man, i'll check your battle thanks again
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