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07-06-04, 04:44 AM | #1 | ||||||
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"Illusionary chains" - keystyle - by AK
IP: 06B8 DBF2
*Illusionary Chains* - By AK -------------------- 2 end a mans life is like 'editing a movie' cuttin time lines, blankin minds, so many 'emotions move me' shit fo real.. who am i 2 kill a man over petty beef tha way of tha street, wake up, fuck, kill n go 2 sleep then repeat, tha next day, without a single change learn 2 live with slavery, like we forget about tha chains i dont mean slavery in a literal way tho yo, i mean slavery in the way we was taught without a thought, lives we live is like a blood sport we jus escaped caged animals, waitin 2 git caught see modern day slavery is racially un-biased, "black or white" we slaves 2 tha system, lied 2 like we livin right while tha 'wasp' society born wit a silver spoon stays rich by makin us work, stoppin our people bloom gives us false expectations, like we could end up as a doctor hate ta shock-ya, but tha education systems made 2 mock-ya drop-ya standards of life, untill u believe that cha nuthin teachers tellin you to quit shit when u only 10 or sumthin thats sum hard shit 2 live with, so we turn 2 tha streets only thing we know, like life-long dogs goin 2 death-row institutionalised freedom, tha world thats infront of out eyes we branded as criminals, sentenced 2 burn in eternal fires slavery these days, can mean many fuken things dont hav 2 be 'trapped' 2 be shackled, 'illusionary chains' see its a common mis-conception, that we should keep our heads up i been ghetto all my life, no motivation left, im fed up wit the way we get treated, generations bred 2 be low-life n cops got a grudge against us, so its hard 2 keep outta strife and whats mo fucked up, is that theres absolutly no answer no way 2 stop violence, like chain smokers gittin cancer we all gon die in the end, theres no hope left 2 defend see our seeds is only gon repeat our old mistakes like a pop trend im sick of belief, sick of violence on tha street sick of havin 2 rhyme about hopelessness 2 a beat fuck it, nigga, im sick of livin my life 2 might as well end it, edit my movie, tha scripts due.... (BANG) * * * * * * * * * * * * yo, dont eva pretend to be nuthin ya not, its un-written rule dont act a fool, bustin shots fo no reason thinkin its cool be real 2 yoself, the only way 2 survive, dont be naive dont let cha credibility take a dive... think before u breathe learn important lessons before you leave, cuz everything in life is setup so you can weave, a personality, for me it was crack dealin learnt everythin unda tha sun, new knowledge im always weildin n i made it, past early stages, turnin pages, my life is on tha move constantly stating truth, no flaws 2 proove but shit, even wit all this knowledge stored in a mans head he still dont hav tha key so sucess, without, metal n lead but its aiight, its all we know, fo real, shud jus accept it death, gangs, hoes n drugs, tha hoods a growin epidemic its like an accident, wit witnesses, but no1 saw shit cuz we wus taught 2 deny seen people gittin wigs split our minds lit, wit a dim light, we cant see where we headed no big picture, we nuttin but payphones wit no credit so stay strapped, spike drama, be insane in tha membranes n stay a slave 2 tha system, 'illusionary chains'
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07-06-04, 11:56 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
uppin.. like it? hate it? was sup
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07-06-04, 03:24 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
ayo can i git sum feedback in this?
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07-06-04, 11:57 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
cmon peep, this tha second day this bin up, theres mo views but no1s givin feedback, if u took tha time 2 read through it then atleast leave a comment.
borin mu fuckas.
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07-07-04, 08:23 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
shit, if u hated it then say u hated it instead of readin but no leavin any feedback.
mo views, mo reviews.... na'm sayin?
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07-07-04, 10:47 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: B20F 67F7
i liked it the concept was nice and yo verse flow pretty decent and that piece can really mean something to some cause they can relate to alot of tha shit goin on in the song so i like it it was decent overall be sure to drop some feed on my peice i dont know how to set up a link but its up there in open mic so holla at ya boy
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07-07-04, 11:00 AM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
it was aight for a keystyle kinda simple though but it's all good do u pc
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07-07-04, 11:53 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
u mean do i peice? nah dog.
if that aint what chu mean then tell me cuz u talkin 2 a nigga that jus smoked a half a gram of haze. im damn near paralised. lol
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07-07-04, 12:05 PM | #9 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
nah man i ment do you pc as in peace
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07-07-04, 12:06 PM | #10 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
u know do u like do what u do
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