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Old 06-26-04, 05:11 PM   #1
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Dark Flames

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My new crew. I accept the good. Only the good. If you're wonderin' what I can do, here are some of my verses from the old RB:

Gimmick Matchup about opponent's horrible love life
Aight, check it...
Hey, now, it looks like all RB is gonna want to give RealiM space
Cause his idea of a romantic evening is jerkin' off to Will and Grace!
There's no question, son, that your love life is terribly shameful
But on top of that this Gimmick match has me makin' this painful
RealiM's feelin' quite comfortable cause here on RB dickriding's free
And when Born To Kill wrote The Penis Revolt he tried to buy it on CD!
I don't know what part of Axe he's starin' at, his orientation's Ambiguous
But it must be admitted that he views all of Amby's sigs with disgust
Only one he's peeped, so Real can't get his mama's cunt out of his sight
If u listen u can hear him cryin' cause there's no porn on Thursday night!
He's a desperate boy now, you don't wanna see him go mano-a-mano
Baking soda & a rubber band and the next day he'll be singin' soprano
Later


And another one:

League Battle
Aight, check it...
Feeble finally got his wish, he's obsessed with this ill textcee
I mean, he's even created aliases for a chance to battle me!
He's the worst of his crew, just a rock among Diamond Minds
And Feebs' pissed, cause he can no longer bite Avalon's lines
Feeble Minded owns no more respect, but what you expect?
Your punches don't connect, like mute rappers spittin' dialect
At the top of his RB career, his full name was said by people
But he has declined to the point where he calls himself Feeble
Takin' this battle? You know Feeble Minded's wishin' on a star
But the galaxy can't measure the distance between us, too far
Feeble's sucked off more than he can handle, his voice's hoarse
And there goes his opportunity to leave a good looking corpse!
He's easily controlled like obedient sheep, well, call me Hannibal
Cause I'm Silencin' this Lamb, and then turnin' his D/R's cannibal
It's a simple fact, this may be your League, but I'm just rulin' B
And that would be all she wrote but there's 5 min. for his eulogy
Later

Holla at me if you want in.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 06-26-04, 05:27 PM   #2
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hmm nyce...hehe...well um....chea i want in....well um heres two disses i took bout 5-10 minutes on...and i tried to have them both focus on things

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131637

^^flow n multies n structure

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130878

^^punches n personals

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Old 06-26-04, 05:56 PM   #3
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Yes. You're in. Welcome.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 06-26-04, 06:00 PM   #4
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thank you....we gonna be tha numba 1 crew soon....chea...pz
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Old 06-26-04, 06:28 PM   #5
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Let's start recruitin' more people. You go ask those dope heads who are without crews.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 06-26-04, 09:52 PM   #6
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a can i tryout
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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka
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Old 06-26-04, 10:52 PM   #7
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Old 06-27-04, 04:56 PM   #8
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Drop links, cause I don't know of you're skill.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 06-28-04, 12:52 AM   #9
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Uppin
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Old 06-28-04, 08:40 AM   #10
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Ambitionz is in. Welcome.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 06-28-04, 01:20 PM   #11
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I've seen arrest's stuff....you kan drop a tryout but IMO...you needa elevate

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Old 06-28-04, 04:34 PM   #12
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uppin for members
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Old 06-28-04, 04:37 PM   #13
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ALL MY TOPICALS--

Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...

:Verse 1:
i cant remember the last time i tasted you lips...
we was finally making out under a lunar eclispe...
wished upon a shootin start that u would come back...
i didnt mean what i said, i can always switchback...
our bond is forever and i want to share it always...
milkshakes and movies on weekends and thursday...
our love was once lost and i cant think of it disapearing...
i cant find what was once true love in a wide open clearing...
our sparks are igniting and we are seperating farther away...
maybe we could get together.. someday that is faraway...

:Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...

:Verse 2:
nights are getting longer and my hear is in dispair...
i called you 3 times and u left saying u didnt care...
i ordered roses and chocolates and warm bears...
im chasing for you while your ordering your airfares...
i cant be without you, a hole is getting bigger in my heart...
the hole is darkning without you there, my sweetheart...
my eyes tear as i see you board away into my "death"
im choking with tears, you couldnt even hear my breaths...
u fade away out of my site as my eyes tear in misery...
i saw you for the last time.. and 3 words.. My Everlasting Love...

:Chorus:
refresh my memory of the taste of your kiss....
you kissed me sexily and said "almost like this..."
our love is everlasting in a bond which lasts forever...
this gunna be my last kiss, last kiss from you ever...

The Hood.

duckin from drive-bys, rushin back for one final shot...
duck before you get killed by a 45. Rifle Buckshot...
dealin weed, dangerous drugs, cops rollin down the block...
gunna get sent to jail 4 life, behind bars with a padlock...
muggin kids for their money, beatin shoes in a subway...
having drive by gang fights, speeding on a 40MPH freeway...
buying new caps for ya cars, polishing and waxing 24' rims...
sittin in the barber shop, waiting for your 'FRO' to be trimmed...
buying ammunition and 9. millimeters, loading up for the fight...
where a gang had just been, it would look like a WWI bombsite...
M16's with ammunition strapped all around your body...
or back into a club griding with maybe 4 bangin shawtys...
colt 45.'s, i can smell the must from the shot in the air...
standing up shooting bullets like whoa, untill the last u can bare...
keepin ya earnings locked up in a safe lockin it, so it get beat...
when it comes to basketball, whites, please dont compete...
having surgery from the bullet that is stuck in the left ribs...
thankin god your alive... seeing daylight.. opening your eyelids...

DeaTh

The End of life something people threaten to do..
Heart-Attacks, seisures, you might get lucky wit a breakthrough..
When life gets complicated and older you dont know what can turn out..
Could've been a barfight.. u took 3 swings and missed you already have a strikeout..
Little kids wonder what DEATH does and all about it..
Could've been drugs, alcohol, or maybe Smoking Commit..
Affect your lungs, stops your breathing which equals Death..
Your last words have been spoken, you have took your final Breath..
Could've been set-up a planned kill on the dot..
Could've been a stabbing, or you could've been shot--..
--In the head and watched blood ooze squirm out quickly..
Your life shortning as you sit there as you dont know what your life is going to end up as..
Light comes to you as brightness awaits.. Its God Love, what else does he have?..
Its death that people that are afraid to experience..
..Could've been froze to death.. Under 0 substance..

Pysco Paths Life.



u r a physcho cuttin peoples heads 24-7/
cops r chasin ya, you gotta run, wanting a lil piece of that heaven/
you run into your apartment dont know how to hide the blood of children/
your rushing them into closets thinkin how life treated them/
you hear the sirens coming from the police car/
police come rushing in but u still have more blood to jar/
they bust the door open they catch you with boxes of heads/
the way they looked at u, u were goin 2 the big shed/
the trial begins, your prosecutor doesnt look so good/
seemed like hes turned on you-thats not like manly hood/
jurys all say guilty its death penalty for you/
there was no extra say, no other argue/
you have electric chair death penalty, your family memebers are coming/
today is the day youve dreaded your life and there is no1 loving/
the flip of the switch youll be fried to death/
you kept thinkin about how u started gettin into this mess/
you couldnt keep up with the judges or yourself, you had 2 much distress/
they turn on the switch electricity flows through ur body/
u feel the shocking, and something doin karate---/
--on your heart.. you just died, no 1 is crying/
they didnt even feel your pain as u were dying/
people begin to walk away they dont care about u anymore u dont exsist/
you in your afterlife start gettin pissed/
fumes goin up and down in ur body but their is nothing you can do/
but what if some1 believed that u were innocent? did they love you?/

my battles are in my sig

limme know if im in?
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Old 06-28-04, 06:07 PM   #14
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i say ya in...ya got potential, but still need some elevatin to do...ya text iz aiight...but im feelin ya topicals...tha hood one topical u made wuz real nyce fam...we need sum1 to represent us in the topical league....gotta be loyal to tha crew meanin when ya in ya stay in..ya dont crew jump...no matter what....itz up to u dark
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Old 06-28-04, 06:40 PM   #15
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