le- nice flow, good ryhmes, imagery wasnt there though, sims/metas were there, lacked vocab which u need though, not great multis, but u rbought the topic origionally i spppoise


de- wicked vocab, flow was on kid, imagery was there too, brought topic less origional but still it was good, ryhmes therem, no multis, sims/metas less than avergae, but i think u brought a more pelasent verse

vote- dealon