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Old 06-26-04, 06:27 AM   #1
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The final breath I exhumed on earth was conceiving no lie
"Our love is eternal and together soon we will meet in the skys"

As my eyelids shut, god must have sliced the cord of which gravity held me down
Heavy as a feather, my soul elevated to the white melting clouds
I floated in utter emptyness which contained neither liquid, solid nor gas
Five senses became none as death started mauling my grasp
I was left with only my mind and soul, with eternal time to think
About the beutiful woman i'd left behind..i flinched
Seldom had situation been more painful without psyical involvment
How could god be so cruel as to finish my soul..gone
Now i started to shatter, the force disintegrated my soul
I'd dissolve into nothing, by being incinarated without coal


But what if...?

The noise was impulsing, the ground split in two ways
I could feel the melting hot lava miles away, what had come? doomsday
Fear in my sweat as i fell deep into a chasm
Grabbed my ballz quick, because i heard the demon would have them
Then met Satan himself...all laden in wealth
Assigned me to eternal labour or be cast into the flames of hell
Heat devoured my skin, blood poured on the floor, only flesh remained on the rib plates
I'd rather my soul be ultimated than regurgitating spitcakes
Infinite others stared in shock as I told Lucifer to go "Fuck~Himself"...even time was baked
Sure i got fucking~dealt with, he tore off each of my needled limbs and cast them into blind fate...
 
Old 06-29-04, 02:42 AM   #2
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Life After Death

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A'yo...

Ascention...

Peaceful...death doesn't hurt...I'm above tha clouds
No more pain...no more shit....no more teary frowns
My feelins...emotions...living up to my inner devotions
This cloudy ocean...relaxin' wit angels singin'...composin'

Judgment from the Lord...

God...please embrace me...I am hopin' that you take me
Nobody could understand...I haven't been followin you lately
I want to learn peace...Inside I know that I've been weak
I am on hands and knees...I have been giving in...cause Im meak
I want to be...here in this holy place...here wit my family
Forgive me Lord...I have sinned...the Devil has damaged me
I have tried to live by Your Word...but life is more I could take
Please take my soul..fill me wit love...replace my burning hate
Lord...this is life after death...I know theres no turnin back
I have never done Meth...I have never smoked any crack

Waking-up...

My sweat drips down my face...my eyes scream open
I better put my sould back in faith...my soul is broken


A'ight...hope thats enough lines...Im in BC right now, its 11:40PM...peace...
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