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Old 07-29-04, 01:19 PM   #31
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ooooooooo.o out of10 bitchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Old 07-30-04, 08:07 PM   #32
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Okay!


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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 07-30-04, 09:30 PM   #33
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i aint think the hook was good enough for such offical verses but i got the point.good song homie and thats real dogg i been through the same shit when i came home from prison but like Pac said'the hood is all good for nobody'
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Old 07-31-04, 11:25 PM   #34
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True, thanks for the feedback. Uppin
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 08-01-04, 10:59 AM   #35
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Uppin
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 08-01-04, 02:34 PM   #36
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Bro, that shit was raw. Hit me up on PM if you wanna do a track, 'cuz I'm tryin' to improve my storytelling skills myself. 1 suggestion - Loner chorus. I know everyone's been sayin' it, but your verses are great...well structured, hold my interest. Keep bangin'.
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Old 08-01-04, 05:50 PM   #37
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Everybody says it's great, nominate it for Awards or somethin'.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 08-02-04, 12:42 PM   #38
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Uppin once again...
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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