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03-19-09, 10:07 PM | #1 | |||||
New to RV
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Do That!!!!!!!!
IP: CA52 8622
Hook- Sending drinks to the hoes bro do that
getting money from selling dro bro do that homeys poping pills bro do that got ice in my grill bro do that do that I get it in no stopping the paper chase money stacking high like wedding cakes blood dripping out your mouth like tomato paste you can see it in my eyes i have not hate face expressions like hoes dont got to chase they bring the money to daddy like waiters mane respected everywere dont got to debate i should charge you for the flow battle me you better spit written i go hard for the dough makes it better for the show throwing money on the floor makes it rain like a tropical storm warning "should i let you read more!" links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3264940 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3264944 |
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03-19-09, 10:41 PM | #2 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: E00D 8E93
Fix the structure, hate that paragraph writing. Flows could use some work, course u prolly have it suited for audio. Lyrically its okay, pretty str8 forward. do you man.
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03-19-09, 11:09 PM | #3 | |||||||
I made it and il end it
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IP: 6838 D12E
No comment until u fix that shocking structure.............
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