Bash: Have you ever lost a love one , Well If U did , then this piece right here is dedicated too you

RhythmicTendicies:
Once There Was A Women, Who I Held Dear...
She Taught Me, To Stand Up n’ Show No Fear...
A Emblem Of Honesty, Genuine n’ Sincere...
2003 Was The Year, I Shed A Saddened n’ Solicitous Tear...
A Friend, Who I Had Held So Securely Near....
A Loved One, Who Died So Brutal n’ Severe...
Lost Soul, Leaving Us Tryin To Take Charge n’ Control....
It’s Like I’m Stuck, In A Emotionally Omitted Hole...
No Psychological Console, A Gallant Survivor - I Have To Act The Role...
I Still Mourn The Death Of My Beloved - Nicole...

Sometimes, We have To Deal With Life’s Tragedy’s...
Sometimes, We’ all Have Our Share Of Fatalities...
But To Heal This, We Just Reluctantly Laugh...
This Is What Happens - When You Lose Your Other Half...

I Tried To Hard n’ Determinedly To Stay Sane...
Maintain A Life Of Faith, Not Turn To Cocaine...
Explain Why, I Went So Close - To Becoming Insane...
Her Innocent Life, Went So Forgottenly Disdained...
How Can I Ever Face Her Grieving Parents Again...?
How Can I Live With This Erternal Pain, Grieve Remains....
A Mental Sprain, A Cerebral Rational That’s Been Slain....
I Can’t Complain, That I’m Still Merely Alive...
Through The Gates Of Heaven - My Angel Gracefully Arrives...
Her Heavenly Words, Revives My Ambition To Strive...
My Quest For Emotional Survival, Just Now, God Is My Rival...
I battle Consciously With My Authoritative Rifle...
My True Feeling For Her, I Unwillingly Stifled...
No Psychological Console, A Gallant Survivor - I Have To Act The Role...
I Still Mourn The Death Of My Beloved - Nicole...

Sometimes, We have To Deal With Life’s Tragedy’s...
Sometimes, We’ all Have Our Share Of Fatalities...
But To Heal This, We Just Reluctantly Laugh...
This Is What Happens - When You Lose Your Other Half...

Eviley:
aight here's my story let me begin....
let me tell about the lost of my bestfriend ....
emotions were hurt they werent fixable....
i wasnt acting the same as usual talking wasnt conclusional....
did'nt know pain can be so clear and visual....
i am here 2 months later still drowning in my tears....
all because my bestfriend past and faced her fears....
let me take you back on how it all started....
we driving along didnt know where to park it....
we took a right turn we when we realized we were hit ....
i was laying there when i woke and the car had rolled over....
why was'nt there an angel over her cold shoulder....

Sometimes, We have To Deal With Life’s Tragedy’s...
Sometimes, We’ all Have Our Share Of Fatalities...
But To Heal This, We Just Reluctantly Laugh...
This Is What Happens - When You Lose Your Other Half...

i love and and miss her till this recent day ....
or the time before when i didnt say what I wanted to say....
Ally(that was her name) your the one that makes me better each and every day....
i didnt know that" goodbye" would be my last words that i would say....
still wondering till this day why god would take you first....
didnt know that my life was this intentionaly cursed....
or that in an instant a heart can brake and burst....
what will i do now without my partner in crime....
remember our friendship that was simply sublime....
but i guess i have to sit and wait till it's my time....
so slowly the time begins to pass ....
cause i feel like i lost my other half....

Sometimes, We have To Deal With Life’s Tragedy’s...
Sometimes, We’ all Have Our Share Of Fatalities...
But To Heal This, We Just Reluctantly Laugh...
This Is What Happens - When You Lose Your Other Half...

WoW....this was stunning, it had a topic that anyone can feel and shit, it was just a hot ass song. Rythmic did a great job with his rhymes. Eviley did very good, an both ya just had some shit which made this song hot.

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

thank you skiddles.....i appreciate your
imput......(UPPIN)

UPPPIN don't sleep please

uppin' This....

A Emblem Of Honesty, Genuine n’ Sincere...
2003 Was The Year, I Shed A Saddened n’ Solicitous Tear...
A Friend, Who I Had Held So Securely Near....
A Loved One, Who Died So Brutal n’ Severe...

Very hot collab here guys..I gotta say you proved me wrong..B.R.E aint doin that bad...uppin for the b.r.e

Hot collab... tight verses on both parts... chorus was nice... Eviley's verse was a little simple, but was still hot... Great piece...

uppin' Don't Sleep!

Nice Drop Fam, I Must Say.
Both Came With Visual Stories, Can Really Feel It When You're Reading This Peice.
Vocab Was Amazing For The Most Part.
Rhyth Brough Straight Heat, Eviley Came Off A Bit Simple, But Still Brought Straight Heat With Her Visuality In The Words.
Flow Was Nice, No Need To Say More.
Topic, Good Choice. Very Good Choice. It Caught My Attention. Its One Of Those Stories That You Just Want To Know More.

Everything Was Hott On This Peice...
But Vocab Low On Some Parts...

Overall- 9/10

this was actually tight..............

RT: First verse was amazing very excellent use of vocab and emotions ran through it. Verse 2......wasnt as good as the 1st due to 3 line rhymes but it was still very good.

Eviely: Your verses were good to keep spittin this hot shit right here.

Overall: 8.5/10

i came off simple......but hey that's
just me ain't trying to impress anyone....
anywho thanks for the imput and compliments.....

PE@ZE

uppin' Jeez

alot of feeling went into this... sadness is a good emotion to use sometimes to create... it brings out alot of feeling you would of never felt had you not been devisted by something or someone...
overall it was good, I'm not gonna critique your rhymes but I will say it was a really nice read...

my deepest sympathy...
peace...

YOU CATS ARE MAD TALENTED NA MEAN, I WAS FEELIN IT CAUSE I REMEMBER MY DELAING WITH MY BREAK UP YA KNOW...IM FEELIN IT, ILL BABY