yo me n my homies were blunted thro together a track, didnt have to much time so we jus threw it together with some verses we wrote in school..tell me whatcha think (think my production got better),,, "showdown"

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buffer.......... lo-fi.................... god.................... hurrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy.............ok......

beat, i ain't feelin'...... flow on first is nice, i guess it you, it ain't say otherwise, lyrics is ok....... u got a normal underground flow, this what i mean i come origional, no one has my style........ but yo, the hook is like, i uno, not feelin; it...... 2nd man, flow is cool, lyrics is more zainy style, i like the voice a bit more........ off beat @ times....2nd time on the hook was better..... 3rd man. lol @ p-bag princess........ flow is again nothin' special.... lyrics is a more deep style......... not much more to say
overall good track......1

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yea its ok!!!

sall good

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1st man=your off a little on your flow but lyrically it's good, your rimes and your multi's are dope men, your refrain is pretty good, simple and catchy

2nd man=your lyric really need to be reworked.....also your rime are simple and lacking at some places, your flow wasn't consistent....at places it was dope and other you lost it

3rd man=lacking emotions.....men I can't feel ya.....your too monotone men, not feelin ya.......your flow was aiightbut lyrically you could do better, check your sound at places we have trouble hearing beat

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1st man=your off a little on your flow but lyrically it's good, your rimes and your multi's are dope men, your refrain is pretty good, simple and catchy

2nd man=your lyric really need to be reworked.....also your rime are simple and lacking at some places, your flow wasn't consistent....at places it was dope and other you lost it

3rd man=lacking emotions.....men I can't feel ya.....your too monotone men, not feelin ya.......your flow was aiightbut lyrically you could do better, check your sound at places we have trouble hearing beat

plz return favor
thxs
peace
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