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Peepin... Bassline is simple, but works well with the melody. nice touch. The main melody those strings or star-y sounding chords are nice.... I dunno about a track for a girl, I would see this as more of a story track. Did you program your meldoy or sample this from something... I'm a sucker for quieter snares/claps, so personally, I would lower the volume on those. I only use loud snares on more banging tracks, but something slower like this I feel needs quieter drumming, so listeners/emcees, can focus on the melody and lyrics. Word - not bad tho bro. word.

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This had a really ambient spacious feel to it. I also thought the bassline was simple, but i was feeling it though because i don't think i more complicated bassline would have been necessary on a track like this though. the thing i think you could have improved on though is having more different chords in this to make it more capturing to listen to. but yeh i was feeling it though...nice work