http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5268988


Its CAlled Real Shit........
verses and hook = all me
beat = yung miss

this is for her mixtape

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upppppinnnnn this shit............dont sleep....

the beat is hot

vocals and the track in general aren't shining through crisply...sounds a bit muffled.

Flow and delivery are good

hook is good


good soundin track dawg


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nice beat........flow is strate...delivery is there..........nothin lyrical stood out........switch up flows sometimes to make it interesting...but overall decent track....

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likin the beat..real cool.

you came in kinda strange..flow is ok..fits and works for the beat..lyrically its actually kinda funny cause a lot of it doesnt make sense..just sounds kinda like a bunch of scattered thoughts that you put together

hook - nothing special..i guess it worked.

honestly theres nothing that really stood out in this song..the beat was cool and the flow suited the track..but there wasnt any real point to it for me.

Beat: pretty fuckin sick yo.
Hook: dope.

Verse One: Flowed pretty sick to the beat, you had some real niice lines in there man. I liked it alot, your voice took me awhile to get used to, but now man its just sick, first verse sounded sick.

Verse Two: inhale the smoke got me snortin rails of coke, haha that was sick man, another niice verse fo' sho' flow was on point homie .. keep it up dude!

Verse Three: nothin' to special here, but it stilled flowed niice... had a good feel to it.


Overall: pretty sick track man, I would bump it again fo sho' - 8.5/10

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like that, 10 bucks for food, starvin in my sleep line and the on the coffee line.. this some catchy shit yo, maybe a lil more flow mix ups next time, but this some good shit i think.

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word thanks for the feed yo........upppppp

i was feeling the beat...the flow was decent...i wasn't really feeling the rhymes too tough though they seemed kinda simple...

i think the hook was so-so...kinda catchy but a bit too simple in terms of rhyme schemes n shit i think that was the weakest point of the track

lyrically it wasn't nuthin spectacular....but all that aside it was an ok track overall.it wasn't bad by no means but it coulda been better.