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Old 09-16-06, 04:55 PM   #16
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Good Battle First Off.....
Now.....
Past- Perfect flow,quality,well everything......I enjoyed it alot.Which is more than I can say for 75.2% of the internet. Never really hit a point where I would say....he's just a chubby white dude on the net with corny stick mic used in yahoo chatrooms. Authentic is a good word for it. U sound signed.
Wordz- Lets see......about the same as Past.....can't really pinpoint a flow in your shit at all.....But.....I was feeling Past's more....the ending of your's is basicly what decided it....that echo shit was the lil thing that made u not tie with Past in my eyes.

Good Battle. Vote- past tense
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Old 09-17-06, 04:13 AM   #17
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WordZ aH God - Yeah this is a hot beat, I downloaded this beat from ya top page fo the mixtape lmao...nice intro im feeling it fam...damn why the fuck dont u drop on the audio page nukkah this is hot...you have a nice delivery..very nice delivery...lyrics are hot and energy be crazy on here...ooh flow was dope but it fell off in one bit..like it seemed u missed a snare..but its hot..hook is decent...nicely made...but yo this was hawt..i didnt expect it...nah mean?..but hot as fuck..presence was dope...ooh PT got sum competetion lol.. 8/10

PT: Yah beat = hot....i like the intro, not as crazy as wordz's...yeah fam qual is hot fam...mixed = perfect...flow is str8 all the way thru this song...riding the beat hot, lyrics are nice...delivery dope like normal.,.hook was catchy...

Flow = Both
Delivery = Both
Presence = Wordz
Lyrics = Both
Hook = PT
Enjoyment = sorry P, Ima have to just edgeeeee it out to wordz

but this battle = close as fuck...
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Old 09-17-06, 11:17 AM   #18
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aiight heres my vote...

Wordz

your quality got ALOT better. whoa. Shit nigga you improved alot, i came in this track expectin horrible quality, and bad flow. but nah good quality and sicc flow. The lyrics is good my nig. Your flow is pretty good, The voice is good. your adlibs are off on the chorus, but its a decent chorus. short song. but its good for what it is. Your mic pressence was cool for the beat. this was pretty good. good intro aswell

overall 7.2/10


Past Tense:

lol, good intro. lmfao @ the whos that? POP POP...."get...out....of...here" with no enthusiasm. your mic pressence is tight on this tracc. and im feelin the lyrics. The flow on this was better then wordz. and the tracc just seemed all around more polished. the chorus. Is good. I was feelin it. You won this because of better emotion and a more polished tracc

overall 7.9/10


vote: past tense


HOT battle. I was feelin both trax. keep it up. This was a fair vote considering im tight with both of yall. Nice shit
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Old 09-17-06, 12:41 PM   #19
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haha this was pretty dope... first match up i peeped and this was nice...

Wordz - flow and lyrics we're straight for the most part... i feel you fell off towards the middle but not a lot so its iight lol... your voice worked pretty well on this track. I wasn't really feeling the chorus i mean it was cool... but just not real catchy ya mean? Good shit overall

Past Tense - Now with the shit of yours i peeped before thebattles got started i kinda thougth you were garbage but this shit was nice lol.definately sounds like your comfortable on the mic and asf ar as lyrics and flow go you were on par with Wordz. The deciding factor though for me was your hook. Liked it

Vote - PT.. Strong battle though... good shit guys
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Old 09-17-06, 01:53 PM   #20
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word your flow is pretty cool should thrown in some multis
dubs sound bad to me idk
hook is kinda weak really repetative
like your voice

paste tense flow was better
idk you jsut sound fake to me spittting this lol
your hook killed his

but i mean lyrically i liked his track better
so vote wordz
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Old 09-17-06, 02:27 PM   #21
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alright good shit imma vote on ya'lls battles when i get home im' on dial up right now!!! LOL so i'mma hit them up good looks 3-1
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Old 09-17-06, 02:56 PM   #22
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3-2 but i think thats all the voters?
so pt won
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Old 09-17-06, 03:34 PM   #23
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dont tally the votes yet...ima vote after work.....round 12 or 1am......
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Old 09-17-06, 04:35 PM   #24
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Wordz u came good here
like everyone said ya quality got better
chorus got kinda lame..but shit i need
2 work on makein choruses also
could of stepped ya lyrical game up
i mean its a topical dude..but u dropped nice

Past
awsome quality as always i like where you went
with this..still comin kinda basic but at the end
of this season ya lyrical game will probly step up
but ima make this short and simple.for the overall
better track ima go with

v/Past
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Old 09-17-06, 09:41 PM   #25
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Past Tense wins 4-2.

Past Tense: 1-0
Wordz ahgod: 0-1
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