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checking in..........................

good luck!

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^^yeah gd luck too....


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1649280

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heres ten lines for ya gurl.....

yeah....check it.....

she got success hot-pursed...I'll make sure you're rejected
even with your egos "abreast"...yet you still seem neglected
didn't realise my winning margin till she puts on her lenses
her eye "set" on prize money, she just "crushed" her chances
kid's defenseless...her future finished before it got going
for her her "blood" is the only thing thats worth "flowing"
You don't deserve to be a player, better recite your prayer
You "sucks" even if you work as "Buffy The Vampire Slayer"
she "misses" more than "Dodge" Viper, I rule this live cypher
You won't "blow higher" even if you use the trumpet of Pied Piper

if you don't get the punches...please dont vote, they are easy to understand though, peace

there Yvey_Yvey...let's see what you got

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mayne...

now how could the mods make dis muk face his brutal badluck?
i aint got bones for u PLUTO..u could grab my lines and chuck
if you really think in rappin u'll eva get buck..y u keep ya recs duck?
ur final destination is ur loss..u frontin' is like a bitch sayin NO-FUCK
the only time his lines flow is when he popped outta his mum in labour
he'ld fall of with the mic if he held 1,please listen'a EM& do us a favour
no matter how many places u may state..you still a nobody 2 b GREAT
put his hands on a scale..and his punches would never be heavyweight
u may roll ya ass&smoke it like a pipe..dats d only means u got 2 reach d sky
my punches only helipn to hit da wine..but the kid wunt STOP D CRY*








* hes 14..and "da wine" means..first ejaculation..dats how we say it herre..


As for the rest..if ya dont get it..just clap ur hands and leave...thanx

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uppin this peeps now dont sleep!!

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nice battle but kinda easy win...
Vonne: your shit was actually ya best ive seen and you elevated allot since i first saw you in RB... ya had some iight punches though ya personals were a bit off... ya strcutre was a lil off and ya flow wwas iight but didnt flow at some bars

Pluto: umm ya verse was not a great as ya others but it was good youhad nice strucutre and ya flow was good and it went well now to the majors... ya punches were a slighty better than yvonnes and same wwith ya personals

VOte Pluto

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Meh, this battle was not bad, Kinna weak on both parts though I think.

Anyway

Plutonium,
Your verse was pretty decent you had some nice punches and good wordplay there, Only thing that I thought was maybe wrong, was that some of the bars could have used a few more syllables, but that might have been just the way I read it.

Yvonne,
This was ok from you, I have seen better, your punches were pretty good, but your vocab wasnt really on top.
put his hands on a scale..and his punches would never be heavyweight
^that line did have me laugh tho :d

Overrall, this was pretty good, but my Vote, Plutonium

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This was a pretty nice battle ya 'know

Yvonne: This was an aight verse from you, you're flow was a little sketchy though and your vocab was really elementry. I just didn't really see any punches that took him out, it was kinda mediocre. I know you can do better, so just apply yourself to your verses. You could have won.

Pluto: The flow was nice and I really enjoyed your metaphores. Again taking advantage of her sex with the femcee punches. This happens a lot. Some of your punches really made me think "ohhhhhhhhhh" Nice verse.


Vote- Plutonium

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uppin............................................. ........

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battle pretty good

plutonium........u had a nice flow and structure with ure shit. ure punches were good, not hitting as hard as i've seen u do but still tight. i liked ure metaphors, u had some nice personals, especially riipin her femcee shit. not too creative, ure wordplay was aight and shit, but i have seen u do better. OVERALL 7.5/10

Yvonne.........a lot better from u, since we battled. ure flow was gud, but slightly choppy in some places, maybe u cud work on that. ure punches were there although they didnt come off as i think u intended them to. a couple hit fairly hard, but the majority were kinda weak. ure wordplay was average, but ure vocab was far too basic. u need to get more complex and shit. OVERALL 6.5/10

VOTE: Plutonium

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uppin again............................................

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lol...im good but i'm not good...bullshit!!!


uppin this thing...

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^^^^^one of ur off days? nah, I'm probably just lucky this battle, thought ur verse was pretty tight, too bad u caught me on a good day, but it's all good

uppin.......

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