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Old 10-17-04, 05:08 PM   #1
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Socrates 'vs' Daz 'vs' Sdizzle

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Vote Who Came 1st 2nd 3rd.
We will add the votes up and who finishe's 1st and 2nd will advance to the Semi's
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Old 10-17-04, 05:12 PM   #2
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Daz lets make this a good one. sdizzle, like show or something

Check.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155797
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155793
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Old 10-17-04, 06:26 PM   #3
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lmao. this will be funny.
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Old 10-17-04, 06:49 PM   #4
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yea check.................
 
Old 10-18-04, 01:30 PM   #5
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your back socrates?
seems u left rv, noone knew, and returned cuz u missed us
now u say ur presense is blessed? ha, like the friggin devils christmas
u aint even the best of your time, just thought u'd like to know
considering socrates ideas are like his money, all play dough
now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round
thats funny, and bullshit.... but its only cuz this fag is gassed
cuz if u were half as good as u sigs.....no, ud still be pretty bad
this match is a gimme, damn i was hoping for a real challenge
not this fruit with:
no crew, no battles, just a nack for using other peoples talent
then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league
and the sad part is they'll believe what they arent sure is true
shit if you think ur tired of it, the board must be exhausted of you

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Old 10-18-04, 02:08 PM   #6
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Theres a 14 line limit.
But egh fuck it ill go 28 son.
14 for each of you. I'll edit this in with a verse.
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Old 10-19-04, 12:08 AM   #7
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noooo, dont do that. its 14 lines, if sdizzle wants to be dq'ed then ehh, thats his problem. ill see if i can work something out with him cuz i aint feelin the cheap win
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Old 10-19-04, 06:03 PM   #8
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^sdizzle^



^Daz^

Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression
You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME
Shit im here to attack, Soc's killer lyrics is on the swarm
Make dizzles chances lower then the fat hangin from his arm
Daz agrees a tub of lard jumped into sdizzles gene pool
While hes a midget with glasses on trying to seem "cool"
Fake jerseys dont phase me ive been a king for ages
To reach the keyboard he,gotta sit on the white AND yellow pages
I should just stop right here, both you faggots are done
Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun
Daz the slut, cum in his mouth and he takes it in the butt
how do i know this^^^? hes SO TIRED of chewing the nut
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Old 10-20-04, 04:19 PM   #9
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Your Gay For Posting Pics.
I didnt even know that shit was allowed.
Anyway Heres a quick 14.

These kids are walked over, after they're knocked in the street...
Is that wrong? i just wanted to keep Soc's on my feet...
So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..
Bad and tough? kid your just mad you suck..
And i'd use a Hall Of Shame line..But dizzle's just bad enough..
Dudes Ur new to this your verses were stupid bitch...
I wanted to diss soc, but why waste time doing it?..
Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?
Socs in my league too, Should retire chump...
Chuz i burn down these fags houses and had 'em all fired up...
and im a meanie son, no im not a nice dude..
When speaking of jokes, when all know this hoe's real...
And ur skill?please ur making mountains out of molehills....
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Old 10-20-04, 05:19 PM   #10
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owwwwww....this was nice....liked this alot...all came gud but really it ended up between two...

dizzle you came o.k ya flow was nice n had some o.k punches in there but i just feel u were out of ur league here slightly...

socrates.....tight shit dawg, real tight, flow was perfect n there were plenty of quotable punches in there...i'll personally liked -

"Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression"

^^^ i like funny lines n this did have me laughin....nice punch...

daz - you came nice here dawg wiv gud flow n some nice multis in there, punches were strong to....again some funny shit....liked in this verse -

So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..

^^^funny line, man i've been rollin around the floor wiv some of these punches...

Conclusion

my vote goes to....

...socrates....you both came nice but basically socrates had the more consistant punches...i felt he was comin hard wiv most of his lines whereas daz had some really nice barz then some where i thought ya fell off abit...

1st = socrates
2nd = daz
3rd = dizzle

nice shit y'all

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Old 10-20-04, 05:48 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Premanition
owwwwww....this was nice....liked this alot...all came gud but really it ended up between two...

dizzle you came o.k ya flow was nice n had some o.k punches in there but i just feel u were out of ur league here slightly...

socrates.....tight shit dawg, real tight, flow was perfect n there were plenty of quotable punches in there...i'll personally liked -

"Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression"

^^^ i like funny lines n this did have me laughin....nice punch...

daz - you came nice here dawg wiv gud flow n some nice multis in there, punches were strong to....again some funny shit....liked in this verse -

So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..

^^^funny line, man i've been rollin around the floor wiv some of these punches...

Conclusion

my vote goes to....

...socrates....you both came nice but basically socrates had the more consistant punches...i felt he was comin hard wiv most of his lines whereas daz had some really nice barz then some where i thought ya fell off abit...

nice shit y'all

peace


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Old 10-20-04, 06:13 PM   #12
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Both were good.....
this is just feedback.. this does not count as a vote... or w/e
1- daz
2-soc
3. dizz

soc and dizz were close....
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Old 10-22-04, 01:54 AM   #13
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socrates-
you had hard,dope,and funny ass personals,along with oretty dope punches,you flow was excellent i must say and so was your structure...word up

sdizzle-
you had some witty lines also meaning your punches,ur flow was decent aswell was your structure...yup

daz-
you my friend had okay flow,and your structure was okay,u had average punches iguess you can say...ive seen better from you man

overall i think scocrates came way better than the other two in this he got witty and personal with his verse so my vote is....

v/1.socrates
2.sdizzle
3.daz
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Old 10-22-04, 10:16 AM   #14
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Wow @ the votes

Daz most certainly got this.

And its rather gay that Socrates used pics, cause thats an advantage towards him..

but

it goes like this

1. Daz
2. dizzle
3. socrates
 
Old 10-22-04, 10:42 AM   #15
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v/1.sdizzle
2.socrates
3.daz

How i see it going down.
Sdizzle fat punches are played.

Punch of the battle.
"Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun"
Pz.
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