yo, but who is Flash's vote too? he voted for Polifick, yet he gave me more points?

^^ 105/160 Mines was 100/150 So I Got it By 5 Points....

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oh, my bad. I thought they were all out of 160. Uppin' this. 1-1-1

yo fo real , i got spul , cuz personally like his lines betta , spul got madd flows yall... HOLLA

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
^^ stretched 5/10

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
^^decnet stretched 6/10

^ it flowed perfectly. Just because the txt isnt even doesnt mean shit.

Anyways...decent battle

spul i gave it to poli becuase 100/150 is better then 105/160

so that is why i gave it to him

sorry i stopped reading the battle after i saw a "cum line"
i was highly disappointed
i will be back later to break this thing down *shakes head*

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^haha

SPul verses
Diss to APotheosis: Nice drop, Nice lines. Your punches were very good and so are your personals, most of your punches and personals are good and some were really funny. your punches hit hard and so did your personals. I loved your starting and closings for your verse to Apo'. No multis. Structure was good liked it. Flow was very good. I thought some verses could have been better Re-Wording, only 2 lines though... had little flaws in some parts of the lines. your verse was also good and complex, which makes it more hard hitting and gives you a better chance of winning, you had some good metaphors.
Personals: 8/10
Punches:8.5/10
Structure: 7.2/10
Flow: 7.5/10
Opener: 7.0/10
Closer: 9.6/10
OVerall: 7.9

Verse to polifick
Not as good as you verse to Apo' but i found this rather funny. NIce strong punches. It was good. Your personals umm yea it was ok but you kept talking about how ugly he is. No Multis. they don't even count. Structure again very good stucture there. even your flow is good nice job. you really need some re-wording on this verse... but it was good. Best lines was the first 2 lines
Personals: 6.7/10
Punches: 7.9/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 8/10
Opener: 8.9/10
Closer: 7/10
Overall: 7.75/10

Closing lines: rating: 8/10
OVerall verses put together: 7.8/10
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Apothoesis: verse to Polifick
Nice verse, good drop. your punches were good here and your personals were awesome. All heard hitting puches and personals. your verse was funny as well... your links that you posted up there were all funny and good. Flow is good, and so is your structure. nice drop best lines last 2 lines
Personals: 8.1/10
Punches: 7.6/10
Structure: 7.5/10
Flow: 7.5/10
Opener: 7.1/10
Closer: 7.1/10
Overall: 7.4/10

Verse to SPuL
Better drop tha your last, i liked this better than your diss to Polifick. Nice punchess here still... i also like your personals, very nice and dope. Structure was very good and flow was great. favorite line is the first 2 lines. nice punch.
Personals: 8.2/10
Punches: 7.4/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.7/10
Opener: 8.1/10
Closer: 7.5/10
Overall: 7.8/10

OVerall verse combined: 7.6/10
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Polifick lines: Verse to Apo'

Nice drop nice lines... nice wordplay you have there good vocab... your punches are OK i'd say mid-heavy hitting... you personals where good though flow was good nice job... structutre nice job too... your opener was very good nice punch and closing was good but i didn't like it much...
Personals: 7.4/10
Punches: 8.3/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.3/10
Opener: 8.1/10
Closer: 7.1/10
Overall: 7.7/10

Verse to SPuL
I loved your verse... nice Dope drop and your lines are good... Nice wordplay and vocab.. nice punches all hitter and very cool personals... your structure was very good here i liked it... your flow was good here too. opening was very good and closing was good to favorite lines is the last 2 lines=DOPE
Personals: 7.7/10
Punches: 8.7/10
Structure: 8/10
Flow: 7.2/10
Opener: 7.5/10
Closer: 8/10
Overall: 7.85/10

Overall verse combined: 7.77/10
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TO all: ALL verse you guys made was DOPE AS FUCK
1st: SPuL
2nd: Polifick
3rd: Apotheosis

this is a close battle so i have to pick SPuL for a better verse
Vote/SPuL

thanks for votin'. 2-1-1 me. Uppin' this dope battle.

^slow down all the dope battle talk man...i cant believe what i saw in this battle
lets start with U Mr "cum line"..


You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
never ever, under any circumstances is it ok for anyone to use
a cum line..i cant believe people are sayin this was dope..
i honestly stop reading your verse after reading that..
i was completely dissapointed...i thought this was a heavyweight
championship match and u use a cum line, i am sorry dude
but that is completely unacceptable..as far as i am concerned
u lost the battle right there...please dont argue with me..
thats how i feel..
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
weak...didnt do it for me, might be personal, but it was still weak

This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
wtf...u are diggin yourself n a deeper ditch..that wasnt good man

We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
another forced personal with horrible wording...blah again

But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
forcin personals make the verse look bad...didnt like this either

So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
wording was off here too, and punch didnt land

But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
weak. nuff said

We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
lmao..this really sucked, this is a heavyweight match, throw
a punch for please

Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
how is this a diss, really...its doesnt seem like a punch to me

You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
C'mon man, thats not a diss...just forcing a words that rhyme
nothing in this portion of your verse gave me the impression you
should be in a heavy weight title match

moving on..

can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
ok..this was a little better, coulda been worded different
but i will atleast give u credit for attempting to throw a punch here

If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
sucked..wording was horrible...read your setup again,
its so forced its not even funny

Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
stop with the D/R lines, they are almost as played as
the cum line, pretty much downhill from here

Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
ok...the setup sucked, i see what you tried to do
but failed...dont do this ever again..


by the way the little comments between your verses
was very cute, it was the best part of your battle..
*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
i stopped reading after the word "cushy",
your word selection is horrible...
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
played... i used this concept in like May ....... 2003
and your flow was fucked up cus your lines were too stretched..

ok Spul, before this battle i had never read any of your shit
i expected for you to be among the elite..whereas so far
you wouldnt make it 5 min amongst the elite at original RB...
u gotta a lot of work to do man...
but before u bitch about how i dont get none of your lines..
read them again and please read the comments a left...
i have nothing against you, i just expected more..
but we'll see what the other guys dropped and move on from there..

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Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
not bad, but nothing special either..
as far as i am concerned you have already beat
Spul...unless you go on a completely wack vengence

Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
no...doesnt really make sense, read it again..
didnt like this at all

Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
ok... this was a little better, still nothing special

Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
decent personal, better punch here

Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
nope, too elementary..didnt like..it was played too

As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
nope...to simple..need a more complicated rhyme scheme
too elememtary....my nephew can rhyme these words..

& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
no..seemed forced..didnt like this either
you are going downhill

Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
not that bad...decent concept...it wasnt dope
but it was better than most of your other lines

moving on

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
this was the best punch of the match so far...thankyou
for throwin a punch that actually landed..

Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
didnt like the BOOM in the setup..took away from your
verse..the punch wasnt bad though...

Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
i really didnt get this one, might be some kinda personal
so i wont comment on this one

Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
no..forcin your persoanls...and by the way..links in your verse
is played as hell..they are not necessary, if you need a link
to use a personal, don t use them..i never click links
they take too much time...i wanna read the dam battle and be done
with it

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
this was aight i guess, nothing special..i did get the punche though
i still didnt think it was that dope

I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
no...didnt like the concept, never heard of flash bangin either
loss me there bro

That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
not a punch here, you are just statin the obvious
not really dissin him to me iunno. maybe i missed it again

This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
i saw this coming, the only thing worse than a played punch
is a predictable one...not a good closer


i have to say after reading your verse, you did have a few sparks
followed by some horrible lines...
it was about ten times better than Spul's verse because u actually
connected on a few of your punches..
nothing great though..keep droppin verses...dude, you'll get there

one more to go ..

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honestly no diss but all three of yall didnt not come hard like yall do in one on one battlles

spul...
good shit son you wanted this i could tell....
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A+
punches and metas A
intensity and personals A
overall A
like i said good shit,you was hungry

apoth..
diissapointed me the most...you know you didnt bring fire just heat
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A
punches and metas B+
personals and intensity C
overall B
you wasnt hungry lack of intensity brought it down

polifick...
good shit very impressive
structure and wordplay A+
vocab and flow A+
punches and metas A-
personals and intensity A
overall A-
good shit ,you came a milimeter bettah than spul,


vote for Polifick

Please dont tell me you call THIS a breakdown..i will ask jpoll if it stands

-Superior

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BOSTON LYRICIST

^^^wtf

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