spul....
your verse was good. the polifick verse had the hardest hitting lines in your verse.

"I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could"

But there were some other good lines in the apo verse.

"You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated"

i give him an over all 7/10

Apo..........
your verse was all about dissing there pictures, witch was funny but it got old....
best lin aganst polifick

"Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline."

after that i lost intrest in the poli verse

best lines agast spul

"Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging."

these were the more hard hitting punches but you still was dissing on his pic most of the time.
overall 6/10

polifick..............
i wasnt feeling any of your verse, it was like you put it together so you didn't no show. it was horeable.

Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...

these were the only lines that i liked....
over all 4/10

vote spul

we have a winner

will people please stop saying that spul cum line opener
was dope....that was the worse line of the whole battle

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yo i dont care to vote on this battle cuz that shit ya say i gotta do for it to count would take too long but i read all da post and verses alot and i think Apotheosis takes this cuz he had some mad personals on what spul look like and on his race and shit.
that nose line and towel head was funny as hell. one

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This was really close between Apotheosis and SpuL, but Apotheosis caught on for better overall. SpuL hit hard against Apotheosis, but faded towards the end, and then made that gay closer.

Vote: Apotheosis

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

thanks PP2. Gods vote obviously count & im not beefin but

Atmospheres not even in the league so who AIMed her 2 vote?

but if we do count hers its 5-4-1

so is it over?

I Aient Win So I Dont Care LMFAo NiCe Job Apo And Spul Good Luck In The Future...When I Do The Pcutta Mixtape Ill give Yall Shoutoutz..

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You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
well i think the cum part was unecessary....it was aight
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
lol..thats pretty funny
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
worded all wrong....content ok
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
lol pretty good
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
lol...pretty good again
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
gay
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
aight....
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
gayyyyyyyyyyyyy
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
weak
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
good closing

*After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick*

I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
pretty funny...lol
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
gay gay gay..worded gay too...why is the first line so damn long
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
weak
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
hmmmmmmmm not feelin it

*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
not feelin this
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
dont like this


comments: u had some good punches in there,some weak lines....but i think u came better here than i've seen u spit before[/b]




Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
lol...he do look like he got a block head

Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
RRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOFFFFFFFFFFFLLLLLLLLLL...l ove that line
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
not feelin this
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
lol pretty funny
Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
pretty good
As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
maybe walk witha limp,runs with a gimp would've been better..but not feelin this
& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
not feelin this
Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
hmmm....not the hottest

Spul...

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
lol...good
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
i get it lol....pretty funny shit
Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
huh?
Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
lol good personal...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
rrrrrooooooofllllllllllll good shit,damn i think the setup line could have been a punch too
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
wack
That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
weak
This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
well the setup line didnt rhyme with the ending punch...but the punch was very funny....good line


polifick sorry man,but this shit is too long to brake down all 3 verses....i felt u had the weakest out of the 3.....so i just broke down spul n apo........

comments.....spul...like i said u came hard...but u had some gay lines....n some good ones also...the theory fact,he wants to be the dude in pic,dick tate,triple n thinkin he's gay....the amount of good lines are about equal...maybe spul had a few more...but,i think when i compare spul's best punches with apos....apos were harder....the top lip,towel on head,arrange marriage,n new shirtn soul mate...i think those hit harder ....not by a whole lot,it was closer than i expected.....apo knows how to word punches n setup lines better........although some of his lines,were weak,filler or unecessary.............ok its like this

win=apo....spul a close 2nd...polifick 3rd................

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Yes im voting on this...

Spul
You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
6/10..played dog.....
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
6/10...this didnt hit hard at all, why would he wish that dude was him...
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
6/10...no punch
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
6.5/10...ok, didnt really make sense kind of...
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
7.5/10..ahaha, funny
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
5/10..blah...your hurting urself...looks like i wont be battlin u...
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
7/10..good punch, couldve used somethin better other than adam and even, but good
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
6.5/10...- points for saying dicks
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
7/10...ill give u the benefit of the doubt on this one...
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
5/10...gay...his name not even Apoth"e"sis..
I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
7/10..ahaahaha
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
7/10...damn, clownin em...
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
5/10...no punch...and gay.
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
7.5/10...creative...u were gonna get an 0/10..if u aint do something like that...no matter wut the second line was...
Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
4/10...gay...dont ever do something like this again
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
7/10...good closer...
overall - 5.8125...weak verse...u had some highlights...some very lowlights...then some average lines...but i cant say if it was weak for u cuz ive never seen anyof your outher battles...but yea, this was weak.

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Apotheosis
Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
6.5/10...lol, clowned
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
6/10...blah
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
8/10...ahahahahahahhaha. got em
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
[b]7/10...lmao, Polifick doesnt wanna post no more pics...ahhaha
Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
7/10...nice...
As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
4/10..no
& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
6/10...really sucks when i get the punch, but the links doesnt work...
Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
6/10...ok...
Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
7/10...nice...
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
5/10...sorry, dont get it...
Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
5/10...again...dont get it...
Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
8/10...ahahhahahahahahha, damn...this is type classic shit...owned!
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
6.5/10...soul is played...since cassidy used it...
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
6/10...weak
That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
7.5/10...ahahhahaha, got em..
This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head
7/10...nice...
overall - 6.8125....pretty good verse, lmao...u clowned these niggas hard tho son...punches were killin em...

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Polifick
Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
6/10..played...weak...
Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
7/10..good punch
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
6/10...gay...
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
6.5/10...good, but worded bad...
Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
6.5/10...i liked the second line...third was uneccesary...
Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
7/10...nice punch
Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...
5/10...didnt get a damn thing in that whole part
Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
5/10...wack, doesnt make sense
If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
6/10...worded bad...
Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
7/10...haha, nice
Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
6/10...wasnt feelin it...
Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
6/10...i knew this would be used as a personal forum..which makes it weak
Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
7/10...nice...
Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
6.5/10...ehhh
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...
6.5/10..lol, but he said it was played tho...
overall - 5.867...u had an ok verse, but when u attempted to have crazy wordplay, it fucked u up...
any way
1.apo
2.polofick
3.spul
v/apo

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ok, so what we goin' up to? If it's 5 i was leadin' 5-3-1, but I don't kno. So now it's 6-5-1 apo, I guess. uppin'

SPuL - Good drop...sum shit was gay...but sum shit was nice and witty....1/4 of your spit could have been thrown out....but flow was choppy in spots....punchlines were funny....i liked the adam and eve line...that was clever...sum wit in there but not much...creativity was there....i give it a 9.1/10....

Apoth - i didnt think u came as hard as u should have and could have...u went too long about there pics and sum ish was just stated...i felt that u coulda came hella harder...flow was good....no wordplay....alot of links lol....shoulda came harder cuz i didnt feel this at all....8.0/10....

Polifick - damn u had sum funny punchlines...but ur stretched bars messed up ur chance of winning this...i fellt ur last 3 bars against SPuL really helped ur spit...it had me rolling...wordplay wasnt there....metas were nice...multis were there...unlike the others lol....punchlines were crazy....i give this a 8.9/10....

Vote - SPuL...polfick would have won if he lines werent so stretched...

Good battle guys

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Haha aight imma jus do apo an spul cause i dont think polifick has a chance.. tho fo sho i thot he came in 2nd in this.. he had mad punches..

Aight spul ripped this.. fo sho he had mad personals and punches.. good flow.. structure.. and creativity overall 9/10

Apo had some good punches.. went a lil long on the pictures tho it was gettin old quick.. links n shyt were good.. overall yah verse was aight but not as good as spuls..

vote SPUL..