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Old 12-10-05, 05:50 PM   #1
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Ike tells you exactly what he thinks of your music!!!!!!..it's the truth

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yep...any audio heads...

come in here...post up songs...and ill tell you EXACTLY how i feel about em...

if they absolutely suck....ill tell u how bad you suck...then tell you why u suck...

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Old 12-10-05, 05:51 PM   #2
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Old 12-10-05, 05:52 PM   #3
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lmfao at me seeing this on soundclick aswell..... i don't think this one will get 400+ replies though
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Old 12-10-05, 05:55 PM   #4
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tell me, Ike
I want e beef, cos if thats your opinion, thats your opinion
you already seen how mI feel about you, no homo.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 12-10-05, 05:55 PM   #5
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my verse on trade it all, 3rd verse, best recent shit I did prolly.....ROLL TIDE ~_~
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Old 12-10-05, 06:00 PM   #6
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Tell me something other than quality sucks. That fact has been established.
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Old 12-10-05, 06:00 PM   #7
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tell me, Ike
I want e beef, cos if thats your opinion, thats your opinion
you already seen how mI feel about you, no homo.



listening...

ehh beat is gay...

lol @ spend too much time on internet.....ok?.....your voice...u need to work on...it kinda sounds like u have spit build up in your mouth...just work on pronouncing shit more clear...and your voice will be straight....

flow is ok....

lyrics are straight....

quality is complete ass....spend some of your money on a new set up instead of all the gear u talk about lol....

u def. got potential...but it all comes with time...and theres some things u need to work on.....touch up flow a lil....it starts getting a bit choppy towards the end....
your voice like i was talking about....pronouncing words clearer....
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Old 12-10-05, 06:02 PM   #8
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do either 1 of them, or both if u want, werd
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Old 12-10-05, 06:07 PM   #9
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my verse on trade it all, 3rd verse, best recent shit I did prolly.....ROLL TIDE ~_~



roll tide...word....even though they let me down the last 2 games...

ok listening to your verse...

always liked this beat....u sound like senser at the lil intro to your voice...


flow is pretty good....but i think you gotta work on the way you deliver your words some...like your saying the words...but im not believing what your saying...if that makes any sense...

your pronunciation isnt terrible...dont get me wrong...but a few words here and there are hard to understand...so id work a bit on clearing up all the words....

lyrically its ok...nothing insanely special...but some decent multies...

other than that...its straight...

flow is good...but try to make things about it stick out...your on beat and everything...and its straight...but it doesnt keep my attention througout the whole verse...


word..
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Old 12-10-05, 06:11 PM   #10
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listening...

ehh beat is gay...

lol @ spend too much time on internet.....ok?.....your voice...u need to work on...it kinda sounds like u have spit build up in your mouth...just work on pronouncing shit more clear...and your voice will be straight....

flow is ok....

lyrics are straight....

quality is complete ass....spend some of your money on a new set up instead of all the gear u talk about lol....

u def. got potential...but it all comes with time...and theres some things u need to work on.....touch up flow a lil....it starts getting a bit choppy towards the end....
your voice like i was talking about....pronouncing words clearer....

copy and paste this reply in the thread in the songs forum
lol
please!?
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 12-10-05, 06:14 PM   #11
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Tell me something other than quality sucks. That fact has been established.



k....

intro is shitty lol...u sound too "white" id say....its just kinda corny.....

yea quality...is like...insanely horrid....

your flow...you definitely need to work on...its ok for starters...but it falls off too much to be considered a decent flow....youll get better with that though...

beats coo....

you punch in too much also.....its annoying...learn your verse...then spit it...so it all comes out in 1 take....i dont let myself record a song if i cant spit the verses in 1 take....trust me...it helps...make yourself do it...


lyrics are good....

delivery and presence...theyre ok....your mic takes away a lot from presence cause its soo shitty...so i cant really really break down on that....delivery though...mean what u say...and make your listens believe it....say your words in a way thats gonna come across on the track...and make someone say "damn i see what hes saying"....

best thing u can do is keep recording and keep recording......
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Old 12-10-05, 06:18 PM   #12
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where ya bars at

i love it, niggas dont...lets see...
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Old 12-10-05, 06:19 PM   #13
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Old 12-10-05, 06:20 PM   #14
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do either 1 of them, or both if u want, werd



listening to b boy stance....


lyrics at the beginning are just straight up wack man...theres no other words.....

they get better throughout the verse though...its just the first few bars....

take that fucking echo off...jesus christ...that shit is annoying..

presence is def. there lol.....voice is coo...flow is ok...a couple spots where it could be touched up........

other than those few lyrics...this is ok.....some of the lines were funny...

quality is ok......

this song was decently done...but it wasnt real catchy of anything...nothing id listen to more than once....try to make your flow a lil more catchy for the listeners....and your delivery too....id almost say tone down your voice a lil bit...your like screaming into the mic lol.....

thats all...
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Old 12-10-05, 06:22 PM   #15
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listening to b boy stance....


lyrics at the beginning are just straight up wack man...theres no other words.....

they get better throughout the verse though...its just the first few bars....

take that fucking echo off...jesus christ...that shit is annoying..

presence is def. there lol.....voice is coo...flow is ok...a couple spots where it could be touched up........

other than those few lyrics...this is ok.....some of the lines were funny...

quality is ok......

this song was decently done...but it wasnt real catchy of anything...nothing id listen to more than once....try to make your flow a lil more catchy for the listeners....and your delivery too....id almost say tone down your voice a lil bit...your like screaming into the mic lol.....

thats all...



yeah, fo that track my lyrics were really loud. if u listend 2 tha fresh prince 1 its how i usually am, werd
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