Voted For: Tu

flow: tu
punches: tu
multies: none
wordplay: none
diss: tie

overall: tu got this one sided RTF PLEZ

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Voted For: SkepTik

.....if there must be a winner......
SkeptiK kwik to drop Tu pop you quit rappin u ought' to
give it up b4 my bars burry you in a pine box dude'
this was your only good line,try making your personals personal be try and be more creative and work on your punches also..............
TU
and im like yerr kid ight ihgt that floored shits kinda played
but why waste a punch?
…………when this bitches flow is like his name without the K
this was your only good line...work on all of the same stuff i told skeptic to work on..

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Ok Good Wordplay and this verse was pretty complex.(1st Verse) But Work just a little on your punchlines. But they were straight and I would toss a little Multies here n there yahh digg?

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No Vote...... Just wanted to give feedback on one the verses Holla

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Voted For: Tu

tu > skeptic

tu...
i wasnt too happy with your piece, i believe that i've seen better from you. you threw a couple of decent punches, your flow was smooth and your structure was proper. basically, i gave you the 'w' because i felt that your drop was a little more technical.

skep...
well, i felt that your verse was a little too simple...plain even. your structure was borderline bad (acceptable though), your flow was a little uneven during your bars and some of your punches were kinda played. if you're going to drop a key, make sure that you take a few more minutes to fine tune your product, because it wound up hurting you bro.

best line between the 2 verses:
"owwwch! an im just warmin up aint even stretched it out
cos if i pulled a muscle… it would be straight out your mouth"

advice for both of you battlecats:
try to step your punches, personals, vocabulary and multies up (when possible).

keep on keepin' on gents...


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Voted For: Tu

Tu:
this kid calls me out, and im like who the fuck is that?
skeptic? as in doubt?…this bitches futures spittin rap
2/5
and that’s a fact you lack the skill…a fucking amatuer
cos if u went pro…a fat bitch wants a tiny dick in her
1/5
owwwch! an im just warmin up aint even stretched it out
cos if i pulled a muscle… it would be straight out your mouth
2/5
and im bored wit you not fed up more like a two by four
cos I got a splitting head ache, but this bitches brains are flawed
1/5
and im like yerr kid ight ihgt that floored shits kinda played
but why waste a punch?
…………when this bitches flow is like his name without the K
4/5 - good closer.


SkeptiK kwik to drop Tu pop you quit rappin u ought' to
give it up b4 my bars burry you in a pine box dude'
1/5
flow's they neva great bleed this pussy like wen he menstrate
ya flows yung u betta wait and prepare to fail ur wakness i premaditate

spit on a elevator the only way ya skill will eva escalate
that made alot of sence.. I was goin to give you a 2 then I seen this line.
1.5

i got 50 posts bitch but NO im not a herb
and you aint a bitch u the definition of the word
1/5
the only time u spits 'sik' is afta i make u bight the curb
dont like this nerd p.m'in me like "Skep ghost rite my verse"
1/5
why you start shit wen it's obious that 'Tu' harmless
simple spit and u cant grasp my verse like dudes armless

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Voted For: SkepTik

skeptik wont this battle bottom line because the other dude had mad played line like hell


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Voted For: Tu

both rappers were kinda weak, but tu hit harder wit tha punches, and his wordplay was alot better

Vote: Tu

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Voted For: SkepTik

I gotta give this one to skeptik because his punches hit more the majority of the time while Tu's wern't consistant. Yet, I did like that muscle line haha. SkepTik had more multi's than Tu's. Some of the punches were played by SkepTik but still most of his were better than Tu's. Overall my vote goes to Skeptik...

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