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Old 09-23-09, 01:44 PM   #1
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Old 09-23-09, 03:48 PM   #3
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okay jay z..............................
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Old 09-23-09, 04:19 PM   #4
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auto tune is wack as fuck,and lyrics just werent there
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Old 09-24-09, 06:53 PM   #7
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this wasnt good, you should rap more, do less of this stuff, you're good when you rap
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Old 09-28-09, 11:24 AM   #8
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kinda looks like you're sqeezing that black girls boob. this is a pretty creepy version. might wanna up the vocals a little or turn the highs down on the beat a little. POST MY HOOK ON JAMGLUE! if i had it i'd be able to spit to it. i like this hook and that little bridge further to the end. i hate that say cheesey bull crap hook though, gew
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Old 09-29-09, 03:48 AM   #9
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you puttin too much autotune on it.
turn it down a bit. cuz its hittin the high robot on that bitch and that shit isn't attractive.

otherwise i'm feeling it.
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