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Old 05-04-08, 03:06 PM   #1
Da Problem Child
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Quintessential vs Da Problem Child

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6 - 12 Lines(keep it short)
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Check in by: 05-07-08 at 03:06 PM

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Old 05-04-08, 03:07 PM   #2
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Old 05-04-08, 03:38 PM   #3
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Quintessential needs time to practice before i demoloush this rookie
its easy for blood to drip from him, basically because he's pussy

it for certain, that ur rhyme are not working
'cause he spends his time sucking dick and calling it slurpies

so get tough, this aint enough.....please dont say your lines are clever
when its obvious that u wouldnt be hot in california's weather

snatch ya girl quick, u look but she wont be found
when i shoot, she catches it, i just call it a rebound

thats what makes u nasty because she says u like to french kiss
lol......but what u dont now iz u were locking lips with unborn kids

this verse iz an F to what i can really win
but being that your rhymes are preschool, your chances are thin

1 1/2 min keystlye
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Old 05-04-08, 05:49 PM   #4
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Old 05-07-08, 09:45 AM   #5
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It's often known how I am droppin flows awesome off the dome
why battle me bro when you have enough 'problem's of your own
I rhyme the wildest sort whereas your whole style is forced
divorce your parents and still couldnt be getting 'child support'
and bring this guy to court on grounds wtf is he rhyming for
when your street cred is equivalent to that of barney the dinosaur's
this sissy is trash, no way what this fool's spittin' is fresh
my raps will attack and overload you system and cause PC to crash
your head aint in the clouds homie, its up in your asshole
heck, I dont need to even rhyme a bar to actually win this battle
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Old 05-07-08, 11:35 AM   #6
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shit, my last bar was badly worded.. fuck
btw, good battle problem child. may the best MC win.
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Old 05-08-08, 02:35 AM   #7
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pretty dope battle on your part
It's often known how I am droppin flows awesome off the dome decent opener i felt like most of the verse was off the dome7/10
why battle me bro when you have enough 'problem's of your own
and bring this guy to court on grounds wtf is he rhyming for
when your street cred is equivalent to that of barney the dinosaur's creative 7/10
this sissy is trash, no way what this fool's spittin' is fresh
my raps will attack and overload you system and cause PC to crash this was a filler 2/10
your head aint in the clouds homie, its up in your asshole
heck, I dont need to even rhyme a bar to actually win this battle again this felt like a filler 3.5/10
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problem child word on making your punches and personals directed at you opponet those could have been directed at anybody..and work on making your punches harder in general. but not bad for writing it super quick.



I rhyme the wildest sort whereas your whole style is forced
divorce your parents and still couldnt be getting 'child support'
10/10 dope line.
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Old 05-08-08, 04:20 PM   #8
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get da fuck out of here
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Old 05-10-08, 07:31 PM   #9
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Quintessential needs time to practice before i demoloush this rookie
its easy for blood to drip from him, basically because he's pussy

vs.

It's often known how I am droppin flows awesome off the dome
why battle me bro when you have enough 'problem's of your own


Da problem Child

it for certain, that ur rhyme are not working
'cause he spends his time sucking dick and calling it slurpies

vs.

I rhyme the wildest sort whereas your whole style is forced
divorce your parents and still couldnt be getting 'child support'

Quintessential

so get tough, this aint enough.....please dont say your lines are clever
when its obvious that u wouldnt be hot in california's weather

vs.

this sissy is trash, no way what this fool's spittin' is fresh
my raps will attack and overload you system and cause PC to crash

Da problem Child

vs.

and bring this guy to court on grounds wtf is he rhyming for
when your street cred is equivalent to that of barney the dinosaur's

Da Problem Child


Da Problem Child: 6
Quintissintial: 2

He won because he had more punchlines and quint. only had punches in 2 lines
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Old 05-18-08, 09:04 PM   #10
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Quintessential needs time to practice before i demoloush this rookie
its easy for blood to drip from him, basically because he's pussy

vs

nothing


Weak as fuck battle..I thought Quiss would have dropped somethin decent considerin the set up..then all his shit was played... I see wehre u were going with ur line quiss..but it doesn make sense to say divorce yoru parents..cuz HE is not married to them..even if your parents were divorced you still wouldn get child support..or something like that.


Eh v/ Dpc for coming less whack..


..an stop seperatin ur bars put themm all together. It looks noobish to do that..an don't put 1 1/2 min keystyle..cuz noone cares lol.
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Old 05-20-08, 08:33 AM   #11
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you wons bottom line the other cat wack and not fucking with you
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Old 05-21-08, 06:55 AM   #12
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thanx dickrider
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Old 05-23-08, 11:54 AM   #13
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Well battle me then Dutch! if u think im wack pussy
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Old 05-26-08, 01:31 PM   #14
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

Terrible battle....both of yalls punchlines were weak. Not much creativity involved. Da Problem Child gets my vote because he came a little harder. Both of yall's closer was terrible but DPC's actually rhymed.
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Old 05-30-08, 12:53 PM   #15
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Voted For: Quintessential

I rhyme the wildest sort whereas your whole style is forced
divorce your parents and still couldnt be getting 'child support'

vs.

nothing.

i just felt that quintessential had a better flow and rhyme scheme...better attempt at punches..and just an overall better verse...da problem child you were to cocky..and didnt even show up to spit..haha

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