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Old 09-11-04, 11:54 AM   #1
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"Falling Apart" {RATE}[DEEP SHIT]

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feel me on this one....


I'm falling apart, my mind is breaking, body is acheing...
been lost from the start, theses suicidal feelings keep on crossing my thoughts...
I'm alone in the dark, a crippled spirit can only make it so far...
and so it didnt take long for me to stop believing in god...
I'm bleeding inside, every breath I breathe, my heart skips another beat...
Its crazy, because I've even lost my will to dream...
my will to breathe, I'm at the bottom, but how can I go up the stairs?...
if I pray to god every night, but he keeps lookin over my prayers?...
he's ignoring me, tell me, is this how its supposed to be?...
how can I believe in myself, if Jesus himself, isnt watching over me?...
one side of me keeps telling me to keep going, the other side says to quit trying...
"keep flying, you'll get there!" "No you wont, you're already dying!"...
so I close my eyelids, and clear the screams of everything in my head...
how can I be dying, I quit trying, dawg I'm already dead...
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Old 09-11-04, 01:53 PM   #2
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uppin this shit...quit sleepin muhtha fukaz!!!!!!
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Old 09-13-04, 04:48 PM   #3
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damn...is anybody gon leave me some muhfuckin feedback [real feedback] on this shit...shit i leave all kinds of feed for yall and yall wont even peep this shit?? come on yall...uppin this muhfucka...lemme know wut the fuck yall thought...shit...
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Old 09-14-04, 04:35 PM   #4
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damn why yall sleepin on this shit? Leave some fuckin feed...I will return the favor...please dont sleep on this shit!
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Old 09-14-04, 07:30 PM   #5
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Nice shit man....i like it after you got into is but the beginning wasn't all so great......you can elevate....just keep at it man.....you'll get there
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Old 09-15-04, 09:49 AM   #6
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yo, the shit was kinda hype, I was feelin the whole "loosin faith" type shit, cause I been there myself b4. keep @ it cuz, u got somethin here. aight -1-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149635
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146392
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146880
o and u said u'd return the favor so........lets see if ur a man of ya word
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