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Old 09-15-04, 10:15 AM   #1
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Dumb fucks keep talkin

IP: 517B B40F

Yeah, kid they call me a savage man,
I put mo red dots on ya than a seven up can,
ya keep spittin shit that's laced wit stupidity,
my flow is hot as fuck , it's causin an increase in tha humidity,
yeah ya witnessin tha illest at his sickest best, don't doubt it or yor be
next, I'll verbally fuck ya so hard ya be wishin fo prison sex,
some of ya cats got mo issues than a news stand,
I got mo instrumentals ta diss em off more than a college band,
My flows are ancient like tha buildin's in rome,
yall lie while I tell tha truth about carryin chrome,
I even rap about this shit at school, at tha pool or even at home,
I run in ya house and kill everyone n ya corridor,
my arsenal fuck ya block up worse than florida,
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Old 09-15-04, 10:19 AM   #2
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aiiiiiight

that was kinda tight, some decent wordplay n punches, ya flow was nice..

d.o.p.e is the newest crew on this site, an your in...if u want?

holla back
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Old 09-15-04, 10:32 AM   #3
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I don't know what this kid was wordin
But I'll put mo red dots on ya head than a fuckin turbin
the shit u spit is obserd'n, its not even hurtin
whoever u spit it at, so pick up a gat, matter of fact
meet me on the frontlines, and we can spit shit like mini-macks
lyrical attacks, I'm spiritual black, so lemme kno if... u feelin that
hit me up on the PM, and we'll see what u bringin
to da table, is it a fable, or r u just dreamin

yo as far as feedback is concerned, nice lil drop, BUT u got ta show me b4 I believe n e thing u spit. so holla back aight -1-
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