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Old 09-11-04, 10:29 PM   #1
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PORNOGRAPHY--(A MUST READ!!)--Lyrical Artist

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Porn was formed and born in the face of the Earth as a curse
to pollute the minds of the young and old/
Like strip dancing on the stripping pole wit no clothes/
Girls giving blows or fornicating and masturbating in front of the whole globe/
Now human thoughts are caught into lust and it's rough,
cause now teens are obsess with sex on t.v and internets/
The world are moved by what they feel or felt, they need help,
cause porn is so influence that even teens and adults have sex with themselves!!/
It's so disgustin, wives cheat on their husbands/
cousin sleepin with cousins!!/
They pass the border, it's out of order,
Even mom and dad have sex with their daughters!!/
Lesbians and gays increases, man live how he pleases!!/
Uses of condemns decreases and that's why this world are so full of diseases!
It's an abomination, Satan Combinations used to bomb this nation!!/
Now let me pause cause the world is lost, Love is False/
And even sex is a $Cost$!!/
Prostitutes seducing men/
9 out of 10 she got them trapped like Victims in a Lions Den!!/
The world say Porn is just entertainment that's famous but they confused!!/
Young men and women sexually used, abused/
Child Molesters and Rapers amused/
So they wander in streets lookin for victims to choose!!/
But the media says "Hold up, things happens, So What!!/
It makes me wanna throw up til' the point my heart wanna blow up!!/
Sex is what the world exalts/
And their caught in a fantasy world of evil thoughts/
And you brought hate, fear, depression and anger/
Ya mind is in danger cause you're hanging yourselves in darkness like hangers/
So why look at sex with a bunch of strangers???/
What I spit is convictions so it's not fiction/
and even porn can cause masturbation addiction/
Porn is irresistible but it can make you miserable/
Some people want to get out of it so they pray for a miracle/
I'm not gonna spit no prophecy but honestly if ya want to get out of Pornography,
log on my email and come holla at me!!/..Give me feedback or holla at me!! PEACE...

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Old 09-11-04, 11:25 PM   #2
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damn.. i love this piece..i dont know why its getting slept...on nice emotions.... hot imagery..son damn.. i like this peice..lol... you had nice Emotions.... overall nice drop.... and keep it up... 8.5/10
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Old 09-12-04, 01:25 AM   #3
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damn nice drop man... ..but i like porn..you made me regret my dirty little habit...na 4 real man..this was dope keep dropping....pz
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Old 09-12-04, 03:38 AM   #4
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hahaha yo...befo u start hatin on porn n shit, n hookers n gays n lesbos n the whole nine....wasent it the people preachin shit the ones molestin lil kids???? hahah what u think u are mase??? look at my name and read that shit over n over again, cuz aint no body in this world without it SINN
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man sinn u one crazy fuck but u come tight wit ur lines i like reading ur shit ur one of da few kats on dis shit dat keep it real
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Old 09-12-04, 04:37 PM   #5
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Yo Sinn, you are right!! There is noone without sin because in Romans 13:3 it says, there is noone righteous not even one. In Roman 6:23 it says for the wages of sin is death but the gift of God is eternal life..Which means if we accept Christ in our life then we're not guilty in God's sight...That's why God sent his only son into this world to die so that we may have eternal life...

You also said that we were the one preaching about porn but the priest molest the kid...Well in case you didn't notice but not all Priest are rapest...Any way that was a Catholic Priest and to be honest wit you I'm not really sure what the Catholics believe because I was told that they worship Virgin Mary and stuff like that but I can't really say anything about that..But I do know that I'm a Christian who believes in Jesus Christ who died on the cross for my sins so that I may have eternal life...I was always depress, a thief, a fornicater, masturbater, liar, cold hearted, always cursed at other people, in some ways a hustler, a pimp, and just stuff I shouldn't have been doing..It's crazy cause ever since I became a christian my life change and I don't do the things I've use to do and it's kind of ironic that I'm a christian because I use to be the one that said "Christianity is stupid and I hope christians go to Hell" but now I'm a christian...If ya got any questions than holla at me at mic17philly@yahoo.com
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Old 09-12-04, 04:44 PM   #6
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hot-danm this shit was sick... nice and deep true tales in there about moms and dads and cuz'in's N shit nice flow good useage of vocab creativeness was good all around tight and it flowed off my toung like water in a ocean HOLLA GOOD JOB!!!!

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Old 09-13-04, 08:42 PM   #7
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Bring back more feedback iight...PEACE
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Old 09-13-04, 09:03 PM   #8
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lol, you some kinda godly rapper or somtin, lo, but yo verse was nice
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Old 09-15-04, 02:45 PM   #9
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yo, I thought the drop was kinda cold. I liked ya wordplay and use of vocabulary too, but u can't honestly hate on another mutha bruthaz belief, and I believe that u should live life 2 da fullest b4 u die, and @ some point in ya life IF u feel its time, ta bring the lord into ya life but u can't do online preaching, on a battle rap site, and not expect negative feedback on ya views & issues wit life. BUT overall I give that drop a 8/10 cause it was a deep and lucid drop, so keep up the good work and holla aight -1-
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