Another day in the matrix, The Worlds full uh hatred
And Bush is tryin tuh save us, By bombing all r neighbors
While 'Sama Bin Laden evades us, We in Iraq wit no papers
No Author -Itty or -Zation, So they call us invaders

Young Soldiers are gettin wasted, Cut down in the days when
Worst worries should be their faces, acne pimples and date'n
And HipHop stay on sum lame-shit, Folk trippin off Daytons
Sprewells man what the hell!, Commercial Rappers don't say shit

For fear of Losin Endorsements, Or Offendin their Labels
Cuz their pool of Fans are fools, Who Hate Knowledge an' Trainin
So fuk what their sayin, And if I was ever to make it
They'll be no, fukkin collabos-wit these Canary Fakers

Full of avarice for God, Nah for Jewels and Charms
Carpe Diem is their Philosophy, and Mantra they call
While Towers are falled, Like LumberJaks choppin Sequoias
And We Invadin Sovereign Nations, Though they caused us no harm

Uh Waste of good bombs, Body Count grows wit alarm
And Tears of the Moms, Who'll neva hold their kid in their arms
Again I'm alarmed, While We fight'n all uh these wars
North Korea plottin, Makin Rockets wit nuclear charge

Now is it jus Tor? Orz HipHop now uh Dog wit no Ballz
Co-Opted by the System, Bread and Circus Neuters U All
Party and Gangsta shit, Nothin Wit no Substance at All
Save uh few rappers on the Fringe, Watchin their paper dissolve

If this HipHop, It doesnt gotta future at all
Like the Last Name of uh man, wit no dik an balls
Now what is the Cause, This Gangsta shit has taken u all
Bewitched u witta spell, So No One can Remember what was

Variety was!, the Beauty in this-Art that I loved
So many Styles Some, Rappers couldnt rhyme wit others
Now Anyone can Jump On Anyones Beat for fun
Cuz Ev'ryones uh Clone, Tryna out Gangsta each other

Now what is the fix, Yah what the fuks the proper solution
How do we End this shit, Bring about uh Sudden Conclusion
So HipHop Can Grow again, And Shake the System By Using
Lyrics and Beats, To Speak to what the fuk folk are doin

To See Roun' the World-Whats goin on, And Speak to it Fluent
And Force the Av'rage fan, To Expand-the Moment They View It
I Doubt this Will Function, Wait'n for others So Fuk It!!
I'll Spark uh Revolution, And Write uh Whole New Constitutionnnnnn!!!

NICE fuckin drop cuz, yo u got hella potential far as I'm concerned, and I like your style o spit too nigga, I give this drop a 10/10 far as I'm concerned u try out for PSA and Village'll put u in immediately. so goto the PSA crew forum and tryout if u want, and I'll see ya when I see ya. o yea I dropped some feedback fa u so return the favor here r the links
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149635
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146392
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146880
aight cuz -1-

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PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Preciate that whole lot, and no problem I'll hit the linx up.

feedbak please. From friends, allies, enemys, those I hate, those who hate me etc whoever......

THis was Descent

I mean i liked the first part of the verse, with the whole authoriy ization line

Not bad raptor, your elevating alot.
This peice was 8 -10

10ne

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so far as ive read that was the best yet
it read well kept my eyes movin
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Preciate that ya'll.

More feedbak welcomed

nice drop mann! U had a nice flow to it and word play too.....keep it up

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)