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01-07-06, 10:15 PM | #31 | |||||
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IP: F1FC 4749
thanks for the feed drakel.....................
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01-07-06, 10:54 PM | #32 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 8D50 76CC
Word fam, this piece was dope as fuck.
I think overall, everyone held a certain level of consistency with the theme of the topic, each person tackling the topic their own way. And each person maintaining a balance between complexity with the vocabs, but also making the imagery real good without overflowing it with too many big words. Some people think that a lot of large intellectual words means a piece is good, it only works if you maintain a balance. I was particularly impressed with Narc, I think he delivered a nice verse especially considering I haven't seen anything topical from him. Atticus and Chymera held up a nice level of imagery and complexity with their verses. Mystic at first, his rhyming seemed a little off at first because the style was different to usual styles you see, but after reading it I have to say it worked well and offered a nice change up of things for this piece. OVERALL: 9/10 |
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01-08-06, 04:22 AM | #33 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: BF56 CF93
upping and seriously alik hop of my clit stupid fucking bitch ur waack no one likes u leave
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01-09-06, 12:38 PM | #34 | |||||
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lol, that's a nice way of tellin him
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01-09-06, 02:02 PM | #35 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
rtf
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01-09-06, 08:30 PM | #36 | |||||
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done, now uppin for more.....didn't think we would get this much good feedback.
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01-09-06, 11:54 PM | #37 | |||||
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I thought this was nice, real good topic.
i personally like narc's and tech's the best....very good job with vocab and description, each whent on their own way of describing the topic. well done overall |
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