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Verbal Abuse 2 28.57%
Myth 5 71.43%
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Old 10-13-04, 02:58 PM   #1
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Myth vs Verbal Abuse

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Battle Rules:

10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
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*Explained Votes Only*

I'm leaving the time and check in as it is cause i know ya busy with the fem tourny

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 02:58 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 10-15-04, 12:05 AM   #2
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i will accept. im just really busy with my tourney right now. "natural selection". but no sweat, ill get a verse in soon. pz.
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Old 10-15-04, 07:23 PM   #3
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:23 PM.
 
Old 10-15-04, 07:41 PM   #4
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records better than mine. but whos bitchin? when ya rep is smitten.
i guess ma text aint hittin. or ya battlin dopes without blessed prewrittens.
cause i only key to vets, i guess this battles just not my style.
ya living cause ya not the underdog. unlike me, ya jock survival.
ya internet beefin. ya couldnt be decent orally, so ya fax jokes.
the open mic links in ya siggy arent links. ya must be that dope.
this verse is hatred. from start to mission statement, ya once rhymed.
youd like to think ya made profit, but ya just elevating front lines.
i shoulda dropped 8 lines, so ya had a chance to come through with a win.
youd like to think ya place is safe in this race, but ya just pacing us fems.


10 minute, quick key...

...this kid had been bitching about me not checking in all week, ive dropped now, i he hasnt even checked. how ironic. pz.
 
Old 10-15-04, 10:38 PM   #5
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Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 10:38 PM.
 
Old 10-16-04, 02:24 AM   #6
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ducked the first battle so u could prewrite, verse needed practice *
3-3 what happened to u being a vet, u shouldn't of changed ya tactics *
verbal beating me is like leg amputee's performing numerous back flips
afraid to drop? fronting saying u were busy with the natural selection *
a buttaface? i saw ya pictures, ya beat, but is that ya actual complection *
verbal abuse..naw? i rather hit the next level, domestic violence *
talent? nope abuse skills don't exist like cops arresting pirates
doubts? u even said it ya self that the dickless can't be hard *
va's talent couldn't stand out if she was in a camp full of retards
sex..naw? i paid attention in health, i rather stay away from the clap
structure problems, va's lines stretch farther then ones on subway maps
ya career's plunging fast like jamicans running down a steep hill racing
claim u hot, ya couldn't come sick if ya skills were fat people embracing
rumors? naw the speculations are true, u sent ya pictures to one-man-band *
va showing skill would shock peeps like muhammad ali performing hand stands



*never accepted the 1st battle
*had a good record but reset it
*she's involved in the natural
selection tourny
*i saw her pics
*her name
*a comment she made
*omb told me that she sent him
pics
 
Old 10-16-04, 02:30 AM   #7
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we uppin for this and i wasn't bitchin, u ducked the first battle so i had to keep after ya, i could see if i was like check the fuck in but i wasn't, i would just say are u gonna check in, anyways we uppin fot votes
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-16-04, 11:21 AM   #8
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uppin for votes
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-16-04, 11:22 AM   #9
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iight this was a hot battle
both you came hard as hell wit da punches.
But ima have ta say Myth would take this.
His wordplay and vocab and multis were off
da hook..Also his punches hit fuckin hard..

Verbal you verse was hot but i couldnt understand it at
some points in the verse. Like i was lost in some spots ya
wordplay and vocab was weak and ive seen you write alot
better.

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Old 10-16-04, 01:10 PM   #10
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Voted For: Myth

myth barely won this battle due to a couple punches that hit pretty hard. A little harder than some of VA's. Va's multies were pretty hot n punches were decent but myth had some ones that just hit harder so i gave this to him
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Old 10-16-04, 03:58 PM   #11
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Voted For: Myth


ima have 2 give this one 2 myth

Va u came wit some nice structure overall nice flow but ya punches and wordplay were not really on point so i guess u can due 2 work on that,but u had nice flow which was bout the best thing u had goin 4 u

Myth
nice flow and structure ya punches were clever
ya closer looks 2 much sumthin like i said in one of my battles
so work on comin more original gotta say stuff other peepz havent said
ya personals basically got u the win in this one due 2 overall better punches

....Nuff Said....
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Old 10-16-04, 04:08 PM   #12
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Voted For: Myth

an okay battle. i expected it to be a little better. but good drops from both of you

verbal abuse-you had a good flow. u stayed with it. your structure was good. lines werent streched out or anything. vocab was good. i didnt find any hard hitting punches in your verse. i noticed that you tried to throw in a personal toward the end but it wasnt really that good. overall-6/10

myth-your flow was alright. coulda been a little better. your structure was okay. your lines were somewhat even. you had a lot of personals that you tried to throw in there which was good. punches? i know you had a couple. they werent really hard but they were there. overall-7/10


very close battle but my vote goes to myth for having more personals and punches in his verse
 
Old 10-16-04, 05:08 PM   #13
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-17-04, 12:08 AM   #14
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uppin for honest explained votes peeps
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-NET RECORD-

17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S


-NEED VOTES-
vs. Wildfire (down 2-1)
vs Ice Pick (up 2-1)
vs Verbal Abuse (up 4-2)
vs Raw Material (up 3-0)
vs String9487 (tied 1-1)

-ROOKIE OF THE MONTH-
September

*EMPIRE GETS PEOPLE DQ'D WHILE DUCKING*
 
Old 10-17-04, 01:03 AM   #15
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

iight...

verbal: this wasn't ur best but i could see as u sed u just keyed it in...

score:
punch: 8/10..pretty good.. especially representin the fems! lol
fow:9/10 good flow..it flowed good da whole time
structure: 9/10..very good structure.. easy to understand
personal:7/10good personals..but not very strong

total: 33/40 (pretty good)

myth: i really don't like how u put ur verse..it was pretty stretched..the only way u made it not look stretched was wen u made the words smaller.. so don't stretch em agen plz!

score:
punch: 7/10..okay punches..though not as strong!
flow: 6/10 didn't flow good at all!(work on it)
personals: 6/10..iight, these personals wern't good.. plz don't use links..they jst pretty old..n not good..
strucutre...3/10.. blah.. sucky structure..

22/40...(F! lol.. do better next time)

vote: Verbal Abuse..

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