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08-27-04, 08:41 AM
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IP: B20F 67F7
.:The end meets beginning:.
The year is 2002, my life has gone to complete shit.. Me and a girl shared love, but than had to obsolete it.. I kept how i honestly felt a secret, I wished i was dead.. Didn't have it in me to leave hell, I pushed through it instead.. Months later, depression is my only friend, won't leave my side.. Than I start talkin to a girl who in her I feel i can confide.. It's my ex girls, ex best friend, how ironic is that.. shut out her helping hand, though I wanted it bad.. Hangin on by a thread, i put my trust on the line.. For the girl who I''d eventually love through turnin of time.. Emotions Blurrin My mind, I'm stuck searchin behind.. for the reason why I ever let my feelings get turned and entwined.. .:Reason to trust:. Coming up empty handed, I open up to the girl that I'd love Put all my faith in this woman, Instead of the God from Above.. We could talk about anything, as a best friend it was obvious.. our relationship was patented, one of a kind, no one could copy us.. But soon, it was evident, stronger feelings seems relevant.. But memories of a broken heart keep me from bein celebrant.. As time goes on, we get closer, emotions feel paralell.. Heaven is the only description, I'm forgettin, is there a hell.. But than she seems distant, we don't kick it, or even speak to eachother.. Memories start to surface, depression is back, and my bad feelings recovered.. Askin if things changed between us, she can't give me a straight reply.. Does she care about me, the worst feeling in the world is wondering why.. .:Feelings of opposite:. A couple months later, she's claimin that she likes me again.. I had a girlfriend, and cheating always strikes me as sin.. But i didn't love this girl, and she had no problem livin without me.. so I take my chances with someone who gives a fuck about me.. The girl I had loved was broken up, was breakin under the pain.. she couldn't stand to see me without her, her face wasn't the same.. I saw a sadness in her eyes, But my regrets had consumed me.. I didn't want to take another chance of her makin a fool of me.. As time passes, feelings for her are developing, and mutual.. How could I pass her up when she cared, to me thats unusual.. We start getting closer, it's great, but I still have my doubts.. Knowing that the last time I loved her, we took two different routes.. .:Bad timing:. Hangin out a lot, me and this girl just lay with eachother.. flirting all the time,laughing, as we play in the covers.. Inactive sexually, although our bodies yearned for the touch.. we're both nervous to make a move, so we turn to the dutch.. We finally make love, or atleast she had me convinced.. Told me she didn't want a relationship,Feelin mad as I winced.. Says she cares about me, but she thinks labels are stupid.. Feelin hurt I make a hitlist sayin "first dude is cupid".. I'm paranoid, because of what I've been through before.. Feeling mad at this woman, than realized love was the whore.. To protect myself i tell my mind that my feelings are dead.. I fucked up by trustin this girl and lettin her into my head.. .:Mixed Feelings:. She's getting distant again, i already know whats going to happen.. the small chance that I'm wrong is whats holdin me back from snappen.. I'd give the world to this girl, if I knew that she'd love me.. I can't shake my fear, the idea of losin her continues to bug me.. I'm giving it all I have trying to put my emotions to the side.. at the same time I try to hide how my heart starts to divide.. I have bad luck with love, it's like I was born with a curse.. Arguing whats worse, dying, or allowing me and her to dimmerse.. Knowin i don't have a choice, I express my agony through power of voice.. get her affection by writin her this piece, givin me reason to rejoice.. I don't understand, this chain of love gone wrong, why can't it bust.. I'm doomed to die young and alone, the single cause is anti-trust..
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-27-04, 03:46 PM
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Damn, that was some deep shit. Flowed perfectly, good lyrics and usage of vocab, good imagery too. Kinda reminds me of "You Never Know" by Immortal Technique...8.5/10 Good shit, keep bangin'...
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08-27-04, 04:03 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
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That explains it all...good shit homeboy...holla at me if u wanna do a collab or sumthin...9/10 |
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08-27-04, 06:17 PM
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IP: 9588 E886
thanks for the feedback........UPPIN..............
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-27-04, 07:29 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2372 BC06
yo dope drop 10/10 keep it up
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08-27-04, 07:30 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2372 BC06
but ya ill say it for him uppin <lol
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08-27-04, 08:05 PM
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IP: A10D 4933
good lookin out man.......UPPIN,..................
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-27-04, 08:11 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
you dont need to say uppin for me im here 10/10 is right boi enough said is right peace
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08-28-04, 12:34 AM
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IP: 9588 E886
thanks....uppin some more.............................
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-28-04, 04:25 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 0594 6E13
wow thatw as dope..it was deep it was everything....damn ki dim real glad your in my crew...wow this was my favorite line int he whole thing
Feeling mad at this woman, than realized love was the whore.. yes that is the truth..i hope that the girl takes oyu back and you guys fall in love have kids get married and die together...lol
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08-28-04, 04:27 AM
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Above All Else
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
damn, im happy u didn't do dis good in our battle, lol, good job man, i liked ur creativity in dis...10/10....
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08-28-04, 04:30 AM
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IP: A10D 4933
thanks to both of you....much love to you both...
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-28-04, 02:27 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
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Kid sums it up really well... I'd say it was like 8.7/10 but it was fetti as hell... u got AIM cuz we might have to do a colalb or shit
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08-29-04, 04:19 AM
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IP: AF76 A123
thanks for the love yall...and yeah i got aim......suga2shane3
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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08-29-04, 05:47 PM
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IP: 9588 E886
uppin for feedback........don't over look this...don't skim through it either
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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