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B.I.Detained 3 37.50%
Socrates 5 62.50%
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Old 10-09-04, 10:59 PM   #1
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B.I.Detained vs Socrates

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Old 10-09-04, 11:00 PM   #2
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B.I.Detained has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 11:00 PM.
 
Old 10-09-04, 11:31 PM   #3
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Blah..

Daughtering this faggot.. his material will never be in demand
He did hold heat once.. when my verse was in his hands.
More suited for Making The Band.. suits ya down to a tee,
Soc could be the biggest urd of all..& still not mean shit to me.
Your nuttin as you'll see.. let me paint you a picture now,
Soc's whole Reps a water color.. the way it just fades out.
Fuck this bitch up and watch him want me in his crew
Socrates was a amazing battler in his time.. unlike you.
Your draws are full of girly shit.. you dirty little Quim
This guy was wearing stockings.. so I had to go & Soc' him.
A.I is the elite rite? but you're in it & when I come to think..
Fucka Anne Robinson..Ray Charles cud see you're A.I's weakest link
Enuf of the played shit.. I ain't one to flip concepts
But its to do it to someone who has no respect.


Blah..
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Old 10-10-04, 12:07 AM   #4
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Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 12:07 AM.
 
Old 10-10-04, 12:21 AM   #5
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Must be crazy battling me, and if you dont mind me askin
Why did you step up to the plate...
...with a spoon and a napkin?
Contradictitory fuckin homosexual I mean look at this guy
He' sayin im ass, and wants to eat me..
...no wonder hes bi!
I'm only commin half ass and still easily break his neck
But hes only mad..
...cuz he doesnt get the full effect
This is a net traveler, been on sites from here to the end
What else do you expect from someone..
..who doesnt have REAL friends!
Just cuz hes from RB he wants everyone to be on him
But for you people jumping on his dick...
...hes really into bondage.*
This ugly fuck needs to leave, his face looks like shit
Not only is he early for Halloween...
...hes the fuckin reason it exists!
Lines 13 and 14 are usless, cuz youre already done with
I'm not even expectin you to drop..
..you aint got a dick to come with!

*look at his name
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Old 10-10-04, 02:32 PM   #6
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Old 10-10-04, 03:11 PM   #7
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Wow jus reaised how many miss-spellings I did..

Eh.. ah well.
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Old 10-10-04, 03:57 PM   #8
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checkin' polls cuz I feel like it biatches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-10-04, 04:47 PM   #9
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Hmmm.
I'll be honest. This wasn't Close.
Cyanide had, hands down, the best verse here.
Or, may I add, The best verse I seen anywhere on here.

Best Line:
Daughtering this faggot.. his material will never be in demand
He did hold heat once.. when my verse was in his hands.

Hardest Line:
Enuf of the played shit.. I ain't one to flip concepts
But its to do it to someone who has no respect.

Best Personal:
A.I is the elite rite? but you're in it & when I come to think..
Fucka Anne Robinson..Ray Charles cud see you're A.I's weakest link

Lyrical Cyanide had the best of everything.

and Soc... that style doesn't fit your lyrics
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Old 10-10-04, 04:54 PM   #10
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Fucking lrical cyanide.. man that shit was A looooong time ago.
Who are you? Pm me.
I'm thinking its Carsonjet.
Oh and Spul please don't freepost in here.
Or I will proceed to rape you lol.

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Old 10-10-04, 04:56 PM   #11
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Lol. Im too Ill for that herb carsonjet.
But yeh,
I'll PM you. LOL
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Old 10-16-04, 12:23 PM   #12
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Malefic pm me then..

Thanks for votes.
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Old 10-17-04, 01:05 AM   #13
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Voted For: Socrates

socrates good punches disses were funny as fuck structure and flow good as well as vocab this was a real desrespectfull verse i loved it8/10
b.i good vocab little streched flow ok though the soc him line was fucking wack as fuck picture now and fade out do not rhyme at all either punches and disses lacked badly and made you lose this 6/10
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Old 10-17-04, 01:11 AM   #14
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lol...jst checkin the polls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 10-17-04, 01:26 AM   #15
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Socrates
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. and minus points for rhyming with and with in ur last bar.. i only liked the wordplay in ur first bar, the rest wasnt to good.. more of ur punches would have connected if u would have set them up right.. the set up u used for ur punches took away from their effect.. attempted personal.. it was decent..

B.I.Detained
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. dope wordplay.. that line about Socrates bein a great battler in his time pretty much did it for me.. most of ur punches connected, though as i previously stated, the one about Socrates was ur best.. and once again, seein as the Socrates line was a personal, that was dope..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. B.I.Detained had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. B.I.Detained gets my vote..

VOTE - B.I.DETAINED
 
 


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