this is one of my old battles and its been buggin me cuz i lost even tough feedback from people who acctually took the time to evaluate the whole verse proved i won. I got hated on for stupid shit in this battle and i kinda think he dickrode to win it just seems that way. So what i would like is more feedback and comments on this battle thank you to anyone who takes the time to check it out.






Revoke
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^^his pic

i dont even have to try

A ghost writer is the only way your droppin hot when you face
cuz the threat of u droppin means no more than Michael Jackson’s baby
You cant even do text how the hell are you gonna get on radio playlists
this so called Mc, to make u famous u would let a label rape ya ANUS
Vanilla Ice is back people please stand up and show your respect
only problem is hes a overall fruit(skittles)and Male of F? still suspect
EmBrace This, I'll do you basic an...........all but off your Jaw
Your not an emcee just a common fraud…u can’t see me like Dr. Claw
to keep your self esteem up this kid prolly tells himself hes great
hope you dont believe in Destiny cuz you losing is going down as fate


LexiKon
My style is like pushin Alt F4 it'll {shut you down}
its similar to a switchblade in a volkswagen beatle cuz i'll {cut a clown}

dont try to shit on me you aint potty {trained}
the only way your spit could be dirty is if you threw up and your shirt got {stained}
so im sittin here wonderin why you {asked for me}
its almost as if you were lookin for a {catastrophy}

you couldnt battle me if you were backed by the confederate {cavalary}
my flows hurt my own jaw so bad i swear i got a {cavity}

instead of battlin me you shoulda kept it {real}
and checked in the bargain bin cuz its the only way you'll get a {deal}




DO NOT PUT BATTLE VERSE IN OPEN MIC, IF U FEEL U WAS CHEATED TAKE IT UP TO COMMENTS AND COMPLAINTS OR RE-BATTLE HIM OR PM STROBE ABOUT IT...

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upin please vote i realy need to know whats up i'll vote on a batttle if you vote on this BUT i will cast only an honest vote so if you vote for me here and leave a link for a battle and you visibly get owned i will either not vote or vote for the other dude

please vote

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wow. idk......u both won

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i needed to see his verse...but i bet you woulda lost..if it was revoke...hes dope..but much props man...

your verse was very good tho...nice punches but all tho i didnt see the pic....i knwo witch one it is...very good punches and soem decent stcutre and flow...you had weak vocabulary and no multis at all..but alright verse i guess...nothing great...6.4/10

drop feed in the link in the sig....thanks

-parallel