oh okay, i just like doing that cuz it looks Neat, lol....but thankz.....

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Voted For: TaShay

shit shay, that was some good punches. no offens tech but she riped u up, i liked

'Devour' ya eccentric Style so simply with complicity..//
my Lyrics easily 'ShoCk'' ya brain like 'boltz' of electricity..//

My Lryical venom attackz ya brain till ya mentality becomes Weak..//
by the time im done change ya headlinez" RV's NEW BITCH OF THE WEEK"..//

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

thanks man......can u give a lil more feed too please....thankx..

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uppin for more votes...........................................

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.............................................damnn nnnnnnnnnnnnn will this every close...damn..

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uppin............................................. .....

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Voted For: TaShay

Honestly imma give it to tashay cuz seriously if thats all you had to say against her then she deserves to win as i was reading i was thinking of about 25 disses that were missed ..tashay step up ya A-game tho that closer had yuo closer to losing and all that '/.,;'/.,;''/.,;'// shit is annoying but any ways v-dml(tashay)

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Damn, why doesnt this site like the quotes, lol....at my otha site, i would loose for not having the quotes...but thankz for the critique....

More Feed and votes please..

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...................leavin feedback i think u won this................

can we get more votes on this...............................

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

v/tech

beta all round verse here

flow was beta punches were beta, creativity, everything basically, funny ass punches rite here, good job tech....no doubt

can y'all return the fav on this battle-
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...58&page=2&pp=15

thanks

pz

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

Vote- Tech Skillz

Obviously a case of 2 textcees that are a 2 different levels.

Flow- Tech Skillz. More consistent, better structure. TaShay had some bars that seemed a bit stretched in places, flow wasn't as consistent.

Punches- Tech Skillz. More original punches, harder hitting, often times coming off of a personal, or leading to one. TaShay had some alright punches, but they were fairly generic.

Personals- Tech Skillz. He had them, TaShay didn't.

Multis- Tie. Nothing overly-impressive from either.

Wordplay- Tech Skillz. He had it, TaShay didn't.

Tech Skillz obviously is at a different point in his game, TaShay isn't as developed as a textcee. Tech, you should look into doing audio as well, just cuz of your flow structure.

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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s

Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s

blah...up.....up up and away....get to voting people..

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Voted For: Tech Skillz

too easy... tashay.... ya need help home gurl.... i can tell that you are fairly new to spittin ya rhymes... ya style is extremely premie and sounds more like nursery rhymes than an actual hardhitting battle verse.... no connecting punches... no complexity in ya lyrics... no originality....

tech's rhyme was and punches were definitely put together a lot better form the setup to the closing.... with that said, i still didn't see any lines that made me go "OHHHH!!" ... also, ya had quite a few stretched lines... but o verall a much better drop... find someone on ya own le vel to battle next time... this was too easy

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