this is a freestyle diss i wrote on www.illhill.com
write what you think about it, heres the link right here everything below the dotted line is the original post, holla back!
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okay this is a diss on a spoiled, rich mothaf*cka who i seriously hate. hes one of those rich b*tches who gets everything he wants, and there are tons of punk faggots always on his dick. so i'll write this to express how i feel about this whiny ass.





when i see tits on you and your b*tch, i'm lookin at sideways "8's"/
time to leave you "violated" like gays when they "slide down straights"/
unlike the presidential race, there ain't no "time" for debates/
you get cooked like eggs on skillets, see how they "incubate"/

you and your fat wad of cash, better not hang it out your wallet/
before cats think your a hooker, and start bangin out your balls b*tch/
like ending relationships, you see me and then dribble at your "lips"/
your "dawgfood" because when this flow hits,it will "KIBBLE YOUR BITS"/
your friends are "chocolate" the way they like to "stay on your hips"/

wanna cum back to my mastery? naw cuz i will be harrassing thee/
and to put it factually, you'll get exposed on TV as an "ACTUAL B"/
claimin that you "smoke trees" keep it real b*tch, the only way you can do it dawg, is by hittin one with "lit skis"/

i'll chop you up, and sell your "cannibal beef" across the nation/
that is, after you get "eaten" by an unleashed army of crustaceans/



and thats my diss, holla back!

aight we get that you dun liek him stop hattin
instead of rhymin you should be sittin home masterbating
jizz creatin
ya punk ass betta off dattin
ya sh*ts blattin
you probaly don't know how this should be takin
dun be mistakin
im 13 and i got you in ya boots shakin
kuz im spittin bars
hittin harder than you runin into cars
brakin ya bak bangin
you into to tar
now take a moment and look at that
im lyrically tellin you to lick my sack
without usin the actaull words
fuk adjectives im usin nouns and adverbs
you probably faomin out the mouth
wonderin wut this is about
moth fu*a im lyrically callin you out...

__________________
I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

man what the fuck is with this bitch? he got his own dick up his rectum. all i fuckin wanted is feed, not bullshit from a fuckin newb. so shut the fuck up and realise that i could merk you with the spare book of nursery rhymes i keep in my ass. fuckin punk shit talker. now suck my enormously large dick, if it can even fit in your mouth.

no 1 would suck ya dik kuz no 1 likes to suk on small objects
motha fuka ill rip you up in all asspects
enormously large dick?
even lil kim will laugh at that shit
dun get tite kuz im 13 and i know how to spit
ill leave you ripped open and loose like ya moms clit

__________________
I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

hahahaha your weak shit makes me laugh kid, if you wanna see and hear flow, go to niagra falls bitch. i still can't fuckin believe this, my first post on this site, and already some one is riding my nuts. all i wanted was feed, not some mothafucka who hasn't yet hit puberty. bitch ass punk, go suck off your dog after you jack his ass off.

aight you older than me and you probably jerk off till you kant take it no more
till it turns red blistered and sore
how am i riding ya dick
when therre aint 1 to ride prick
if im makkin you laugh then why you gettin pist
my lyrics are all ova you up in ya eye givin you a sist
look at this im young and im bustin ya balls
ill go to niagra falls
push you off spit against you all while im makin phonecalls
to your pigeon girlfriend in deed
infact thats about the only reason this thread would have feed (pigeon feed)

__________________
I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

i'm in a rage, this i'll leave this teenager dying of old age/ with alzheimers from witnessing all the words on this page/
if you licked MJ's dick, not even then could you "taste" fame/
face pain bitch, the bars come at you, stinging your eyes like mace rain/

your a part of my spawn with your mom, in other words that ladys "litter"/
you ain't tryin to battle me, your just looking for another babysitter/
like kids who don't like their food, your just another "baby spitter"/
my intoxicating flows will leave you with the "Bailey jitters"/

your whole verse was weak, it stunk more than your ailing vomit/
while my punches are on point and flaming, just like hayleys comet/
i'll leave you howlin "praise the lord" like a fuckin "wailing amish"/

that was off my dome mutha fucka. taste the fury bitch, its over.

hahahha mutha fucka, i can see that you don't have anything more to say to me, BITCH! LMAO, no talent cumsucker

>your friends are "chocolate" the way they like to "stay on your hips"/

Lol best line. Nice one man.

stait off dome?
you probably took 3 hours thinkin of tha shit at home
ya shit it wak
ill beat ya ass rhymin while im playin pitti pat
what are you smokin krak?
you probably fat
kuz my rhymes got you catchin asmtha attacks
im fiering lyrical bullets that go brat ta tat
not ever in my life did i see a wak come bak like dat
till now
wanna beat me let one of these reall rappers show you how
i come bak at you each time blow
you callin me cumsucker when your the one that likes to blow
nigga im to ill for you if you didn't know
ill rip ya shit up wether i bust it fast or slow...

__________________
I leave you in the same haze
that you in afta ya blaze
dun worry i aint done
this ish just begun
im out o1ne

aight yo help me out with this
SaRe 2 V.s. Fuck up

attack of the lyrics, armed with the fury of armies/
wack bitches will fear it, when these words will scar thee/
triskadekaphobia is the fear of unlucky numbers/
you've tripped and fallen off, like and "unlucky runner"/
you get "fired" from the site, like i was an angry manager/
you handle more "broomsticks" than the busiest of janitors/

i'll pierce you through your skull, like i was a bad "william tell"/
if you were "harry potter" not even then could you learn to "spell"/

you and your crew couldn't "drop a bomb" if you were a B-52/
tell you what i'll give you a dime, so a cheap B can start licking you/
he couldn't create "dope" lyrics if he shot em up with high endorphinage/
you go from punk, to a sack of ashes, in other words a twisted metamorphosis/

and for your info, i'm not a nigga. so never assume that i'm one. stupid shit talkin faggot

now i want all y'all to tell me who the better lyricist is, me or this prepubescent tampon sucker. holla.

ill rhymes to both you guys