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Old 12-09-04, 04:18 PM   #1
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12. RDotGod Vs. 53. KOOL COL-B

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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
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The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

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Old 12-10-04, 06:15 PM   #2
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check, werd
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Old 12-10-04, 07:58 PM   #3
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R...
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God...
 
Old 12-10-04, 07:58 PM   #4
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Do that one more time and your out of the tourney sdizzle - F.I
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Old 12-11-04, 04:10 PM   #5
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Yo...

It's like...

When this kid bites, we see ya weak and suck
Col-b jacks lines, that end up cheesy as fuck
.
.
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Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent
And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument
Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do...
...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot
Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through
While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol
I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best...
...predicted Top 4 in the tourney...
...you're not even Top 4 in this thread
 
Old 12-11-04, 07:54 PM   #6
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ur wrong my friend, THIS iz wut it's like...



Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/

i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/

but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/

tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/

cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//


EXPLINATIONS...

Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/
(it explains itself)

i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
(he did a interview wit vango, and i did mo research on him than just read tha interview)

and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/
(during my research i found out he haz alot of alias's)

but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
(sum people say that he's a legend)

cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/
(people say that he's fallin off. people on september 11th fell of tha WTCs)

tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/
(i sed hiz verse belongs in a garbage can. starvin people like hobos eat out of garbage cans, but if i wuz a hobo i woodnt even feed of hiz verse)

cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
(kinda like i woodnt eat it if i wuz a hobo cuz it wood have bites taken out of it. chrit wuz banned under a alias on RB fo bitting)

and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//
(stilll wit tha eatin verse out of garbage shit. cuz if u eat food out of a garbage can, its kinda like recycling. ...

Quote:
Originally Posted by RdotC
when I recycled a whole battle lol


sarry fo tha long explination, but i just wanna make sure everybody understands my verse. if theres sumthin about it that u still dont understand, then tell me and i will explain it. werd
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Old 12-11-04, 07:56 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
ur wrong my friend, THIS iz wut it's like...


Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/

i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/

but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/

tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/

cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//


EXPLINATIONS...

Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/
(it explains itself)

i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
(he did a interview wit vango, and i did mo research on him than just read tha interview)

and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/
(during my research i found out he haz alot of alias's)

but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
(sum people say that he's a legend)

cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/
(people say that he's fallin off. people on september 11th fell of tha WTCs)

tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/
(i sed hiz verse belongs in a garbage can. starvin people like hobos eat out of garbage cans, but if i wuz a hobo i woodnt even feed of hiz verse)

cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
(kinda like i woodnt eat it if i wuz a hobo cuz it wood have bites taken out of it. chrit wuz banned under a alias on RB fo bitting)

and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//
(stilll wit tha eatin verse out of garbage shit. cuz if u eat food out of a garbage can, its kinda like recycling. ...



sarry fo tha long explination, but i just wanna make sure everybody understands my verse. if theres sumthin about it that u still dont understand, then tell me and i will explain it. werd


wen i posted it it fucked up my first bar. werd
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Old 12-11-04, 09:06 PM   #8
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CALI's vote doesnt count what the fuck you stupid bitches keep voting and your out go read the thread important read or be banned next time i see you doing this your out and i dont care how much you cry about it - F.I
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Old 12-11-04, 11:11 PM   #9
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basically rdotgod got this

he was much more wittier.............he had good witty punches.........had a pretty good personal at the end it was a good closer........

kool-b you had like two decen personals.........the sinner line and the fallin off line.....was decent...........but your structure was fucked.......and the rest of your verse was blahhh.......

v/rdotgod
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Old 12-11-04, 11:42 PM   #10
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ur wrong my friend, THIS iz wut it's like...Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/
stretched lines....no real punch
i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/
pretty good
but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/
ight personal
tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/
no..
cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//
nope...

Yo...

It's like...

When this kid bites, we see ya weak and suck
Col-b jacks lines, that end up cheesy as fuck
ehh decent
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Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent
And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument
pretty good
Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do...
...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot
lol....nice...liked the concept
Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through
While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol
self glorifcation mehh...
I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best...
...predicted Top 4 in the tourney...
...you're not even Top 4 in this thread
lol i liked this closer


thats my break down...an di mean your structure you dont need to space your bars............and u dont need this //// we can all read and we know the rhyming words
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Old 12-11-04, 11:48 PM   #11
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read th apost under my verse, i fixed my 1st bar. i didnt mean 2 have it streached like that.

tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/
no..
cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//
nope...

smh. werd
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Old 12-12-04, 01:37 AM   #12
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ok cook me and flow decided u freepost again ur out of the tourney
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Old 12-12-04, 05:39 PM   #13
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Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent
And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument
I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best...
...predicted Top 4 in the tourney...
...you're not even Top 4 in this thread

vs.

Nothing of Kool Col-Bs..

Seriously..

And, Kool, dont even bitch.. You're wack.

Vote - RdotGod
 
Old 12-12-04, 07:36 PM   #14
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Chrit, people say that ur a vet, well im a VETERAN TOO/
i dont got as many wins az u, but im still BETTER THAN U/
NOt a punch...
i did my research, not just read ur INTERVIEW/
and i c u got mo alias's than wut SINNER DO/
Ehh below average...couldve done good w/ the sinner reference but failed
but how tha fuck can people consider THEM 2 B LEGENDS?/
cuz u fallin off like people on sepTEMBER 11TH/
Ok.........
tha only place yo verse belongs iz in a GARBAGE CAN/
i woodnt feed off of yo shit if i wuz a STARVING MAN/
ehhhh ok.........cuz i dont like feedin of shit thats BEEN BITTIN'/
and i dont recycle like Chrit when he's SEEN SPITTIN//
no...

Drunk with power Dot'll leave ya busted and bent
And ya verse full of bloody words like a British argument
ahahahahh
Spent a grip on ya rep... its something homos do...
...put up a big enough front for a playboy photo shoot
lol....nice concept
Bound to lose, this round Dot'll fly through
While giving you the chance to finally meet your idol
Hyping yourself up...
I mean shit... you cant burn me, Chrit's one of the best...
...predicted Top 4 in the tourney...
...you're not even Top 4 in this thread
Dope.....
v/ RdotGod.....he came witty and with the dope punches while Kool had nothing...
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Old 12-13-04, 06:51 PM   #15
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rdot for better structure and excellent personals
kool work on ur vocab and ur structure and personals for sure
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