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Old 10-09-05, 11:27 PM   #1
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Apostrophe vs. Os1ris

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Old 10-10-05, 12:24 PM   #2
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check..........
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Old 10-11-05, 01:16 PM   #3
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Old 10-12-05, 03:46 PM   #4
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Topical Head?? You Might Be The RITT Champion.. But I'll Crush This Queer..
Cause Like Your Location.. A Square Doesnt Fit In A Circle..
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Old 10-12-05, 04:57 PM   #5
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How ya above anyone's lines,you always comin up short,like ya sig rappers height
How you untouchable, when apostrophe's are one of the most used on this site

*If anyone needs something explained..I will.
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Old 10-12-05, 06:16 PM   #6
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v/Os1ris

apostrophe's was too simple

O's was okish
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i didnt really like either of them

but os had a stretched bar......and it was played and simplistic
apostrophe had a less stretched bar, but his was more of a punch

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Old 10-12-05, 06:55 PM   #8
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really didnt like either
so ill vote on the better personal
v/ apostrophe
 
Old 10-12-05, 08:06 PM   #9
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Weak battle here.
Osiris has an ok concept..but he worded it bad.
And his whole bar was stretched out.

v/Apos.
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Old 10-12-05, 08:25 PM   #10
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thanks for the honest votes.. i know my punch was pretty weak.. but i had a personal in there.. && i didnt really expect a topical guru to come real hard..
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Old 10-12-05, 09:41 PM   #11
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yea v/apos the personal was good....though it coulda been worded betta to make it a hard hitting PL but still good to get tha v/.....
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Old 10-13-05, 12:09 AM   #12
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v/Osiris

Cuz his acutally had a punch, by the way, squares do fit into circles,
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Old 10-13-05, 07:40 AM   #13
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nerd............
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Old 10-13-05, 04:12 PM   #14
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v- Osiris
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Old 10-13-05, 04:28 PM   #15
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V/Osiris, better punch
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